Fanon talk:Night of the Living PlumbBob

Amputations, Impalements, the works
Okay, so I've revised the draft of this Fanon about 5 times, adding and removing stuff. I would like to tell/ask you all something. At any time, if the story is too gory/violent for you, please complain on the talk page. Of course, also remember that there is a warning at the top of the page, so it might be best to not read it at all. I have a difficulty splitting things that some would find horrible and scary and that which makes a good horror story. I am taking measures to make this a good horror story without too much violence, so please, once again, complain on the talk page about something you don't like. Thank you. -- BobNewbie talk • blog 13:42, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

You're a good writer! It's very intense so far, I especially like the opening. Nice work! PlantsvsZombies 01:21, March 5, 2011 (UTC)


 * Thanks PvZ! Expect more gore, more tension and more zombies in the next! BobNewbie talk •  blog 06:41, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Review of Chapter One
Here's my review for your first chapter. Honestly, it was well laid out and I really liked the story conclusion with a suspenseful ending. I give the first chapter an A+! Ѧüя◎ґ 06:57, March 5, 2011 (UTC)


 * Thanks Auror! I appreciate you taking time to read and review it! BobNewbie talk •  blog 07:07, March 5, 2011 (UTC)


 * Here's my review for the first chapter of the story. Sincerely, it was that awesome that I loved it, and the readers would as well. I love the way you started it and ended it. But what I really liked was the tragic irony in the third paragraph. However, I think you should ask yourself why Agnes would fall in love with such a disguisting man like Xander Clavell. Isn't it a little too weird? After all, I think that it was an awesome story and you are a talented author, so I give the chapter (and you) an A+ as well! |_Andronikos Leventis Talk 08:32, March 5, 2011 (UTC)


 * Thanks AL! I appreciate you taking time to read and review it! Also, remember that there are plenty of people who want Agnes's fortune, and the date will be explained later. BobNewbie talk •  blog 09:10, March 5, 2011 (UTC)