User talk:Letsplaygameplay99

Bella!
Doesn't Bella appear after a while? :P

AsherEire

Well done! Cassandra will go to Strangetown and accidentally find her and bring her back! Keep it secret!

And Lilith? Well, Guess there might be two Dreamer fathers?

Yep!

I knew it! Just don't stop because one guy did a fanon where Angela gets pregnant and stopped after the 3rd chapter! It made me sad. Just don't stop, whatever you do!

Hopefully, it will go on for at least a year! If I get to that, there will be a special episode! Not sure what though! I've just had an idea!

Cool! I don't think mine will gone on for that long... a few months at the most, but it will cover a few years of the story. Who knows how it will all end?

If I get to a year, then it would probably be Nina's death!

A YEAR!!! Wow, you are going to need a LOT of ideas!

I'll read up, maybe give a couple of characters cancer. Fires, earthquakes, train crash! Don't you worry mate, I'll get some ideas! Probably steal them off EastEnders! lol XD

I think cancer might be a little extreme considering Nina has AIDS. Maybe make some Sims happy- Mary-Sue could find someone nice perhaps? She deserves a break after Dan, Kaylynn and Lilith!

Don't know what happened above!!!! Mary-Sue is nice.... With what's about to happen, Lilith will deserve what she's going to get!

I don't think she deserves it! I think it was just an honest mistake! I'm not saying what she does with the baby yet though!

TBH, I don't think Lilith should give it up for adoption or anything like that! It's too harsh and I don't think Lilith or Dirk would make a decision like that! Most parents would get annoyed at pregnant teens, but after the recent events, everyone will be on edge and might snap, making them seem more angry! Poor Lilith... her life's going to be so messed up after this...

Maybe not! I've had a good idea! It might be unbelievable but it might work! Do you want to know?

Why not? Go on then!

Angela could get a place in a university but gives it to Lilith as a peace offering. They make up before Lilith parts! What could she become?

Lilith... hmmm... I really don't know! I was thinking biology????

Hmmm... good idea! What would happen to Angela though if she gave up her uni place?

Maybe Alex could get upset for Lilith leaving! Angela could see how upset he gets, befriends him and Alex could persuade Mortimer to give her a place at private school so they would have something in common! Angela would be polite and decline the offer, but it could upset Alex more... He's only a kid... Since Cassandra could persuade Mary-Sue to let Angela go. After all there could be an extension course for those who couldn't get a college place, right?

I like that idea but with Daniel and Mary-Sue being the way they are, it might be difficult unlees Angela moves out to live with her mum!

Yep, I think Angela should move out. Dan's just too harsh on her.

Yeah!

Hey! 100th edit, man! So, what do you think of this Mona character?

She sounds cool! She's for Dustin then? If I remember correctly!

Yep. It might not last, but then it might! And what about Angela? Well, there are the Lothario twins, Richie, or Alexander. This is where Cassandra and Mary-Sue got married and had kids at around the same time. Alex was four when Cass got married and seven when Donnie and Marty where born, so he's... 23. Just wait till Angela's a little older and -BAM! She's his. But she might not...

She might think the Goth's are below her 'standards'. I've just been listening to Material Girl and Angela came to mind!

Plus an older Alex might be more shy... do you think I should put up another chapter now?

It depends whether you are in the mood to write or not! That's why I was a few days late with mine because I had the ideas I just couldn't write them down!

I see. Anyway, Mona might make an appearance soon!

I love your stories by the way! I can't see what I'm typing! I've got DT homework to do!

TURN IT OFF! TURN IT OFF! Thanks, anyway. The Pleasantview Files are pretty sweet. I'm always checking during the week for updates! And homework is so annoying!

I'll do one in a couple of hours! This is with your idea about Dustin getting angry with Dan about Ange!

^_^ Gotta love Angie though. And Lily. And I CAN'T DECIDE! Team Angith? Team Lilaga?

I want to call her Angie Watts!! I love you so much if you know who she is!

EastEnders? :P

Yep! I LUV YOU!!

Awwwww... :D

I've had an idea for Mary-Sue! She finds a new lover and moves away with him!

The lover's a good idea, but making her move away? I'm not sure. The new guy could make Daniel feel very guilty for the affair.

It would make him think again before cheating on Kaylynn with anyone!

Yep! Still, can't wait for Bella!

There will be little hints along the way! When we go back to the Goth's and Cassandra goes for a scan, she might see a flash of red!

I see. Very sneaky hints there!

I've had an epic idea!!!

Oh yes? What is it?

Cassandra sees Bella in Strangetown but thinks its an illusion so she goes back home. It isn't an illusion and Bella follows her back. Mortimer and Dina are getting married but Bella turns up and goes, "Hello Morty!". Then the part finishes!

That sounds EPIC! I knew that Bella's reappearance will mess things up!

The problem is Mortimer has said his vows but before he kisses Dina, he runs over and kisses Bella. Dina gets angry and sets fire to Goth Manor that night. She stands in Alex's room to watch him die but a plank of wood falls and knocks her out. Mortimer gets Cassie and Bella out but runs back in to get Alex. He sees Dina there and thinks whether she is more important than his son. The part ends!

If Mortimer saves Dina and leaves Alex, he will be a pathetic excuse of a father! But Alex will be able to walk, right? Maybe a bit of heroics could come into effect?

Changed my mind! Dina has a change of heart, goes back to save Alex but they both get hit by the wood. Morty goes back in. End of part!

Wow... that is better though. If Dina cares so much for Nina, you couldn't leave a little boy to die in a fire, could you?

Exactly! So Morty is there, choosing Dina or Alex. He goes to Alex and the fire consumes the house!

O_o I liked that house... What about Dina?

The house is consumed with fire! Bells and Cass think that Morty and Alex are dead. They come out together and they stand as a family. The part ends with a burnt Dina lying by the graves, dead!

Wow... that's the end of the Caliente family, then.

Nina is still alive remember! Only for a few months and then she dies in her sleep from AIDS! But there might be another Caliente sister!

Another Caliente sister?! Oh, I see! I've done another Sim who is secret and I'm not saying who it is yet- he is briefly mentioned by someone...

She's like a left out one! I was thinking that she got pregnant at like 13 and her family disowned her. She comes back of Dina's funeral after the fire.

Naaaawwww... being left out is quite harsh, but still, a pretty good idea!

Use the next space instead! This is too long-winded! I've created one more!

AsherEire talk!
Alright! Plus it will avoid people looking at Bella! Then it will lead to a truckload of spoilers! BTW, you live in the UK, right?

I know! It's not like loads of people follow the story but I don't want a killjoy to come along and give it away! I do live in the UK yes!

Cool! I live in the UK too and I'm Irish! Eire kinda gives that away because Eire is Irish for Ireland! ^_^ And practically everyone calls me Ash so... Spoilers gives everything away!

I sort of guessed but I didn't ask in case I was wrong!

No worries! So what about you? You got a nickname, because Letsplaygameplay99 is a bit of a mouthful!

Jimbob!

Nice to meet you Jimbob. LOL! XD

LOL XD!

Anyway, when's the next chapter going up? I've been hyping it all day!

I'll do it now!

Wow, that was epic! Dan was really harsh! Everyone knows Brandi trues hard to provide for her three boys. BTW, has the unborn son been born?

Not yet! That is going to happen in their storyline next week!

I see. I was wondering about that. He's in my story. I named him Tommy! ^_^ Don't ask why.

The first line on Monday's episode will be: "Push mum, push!"

Naaawww... I presume that's Dustin? What stage is Beau at? He grows up before Brandi gets pregnant in-game, if I recall correctly.

He's inbetween being a toddler and a child in this version! It is Dustin! She's going to have a bad birth!

Why a bad one? Is it at home? :(

A home birth but the baby is the wrong way round!

Man! That's gross! Is that even possible?

I don't know but her waters have broken at the right time but the baby isn't the right way!

I don't know if it's right! I'm not going to research it! It's your fanon anyway, so you choose what to do. It'll be great either way. I think a normal birth will be what;s best- but it's your choice! :)

Things will go badly but the baby will live!

Good! We don't want this to upset the audience to much- it might get this shut down if it's too bad!

Yeah! And it would upset me to write it like writing Nina's death!

Of course! Just make sure it doesn't get too graphic. Poor Nina... :( Hate Don because of that now!

You'll hate Don soon enough! When he finds out that Cassandra is pregnant and the baby isn't his!

So you've decided? Wow, Dirk's going to be a dad AND get a half brother... he's going to be in a sticky situation!

I knew that it would be Darren's from when I said that it might be his! I don't want her to wreck her life by being with Don! He's good but she doesn't deserve him!

It's so weird with the many different interprations! As you see, Don was a nice guy in my story/game!

He's a nice guy in this as well! Its just Dina hates him and she's one of the main characters!

I know he's nice, it's just, in my fanon he's 100% loyal to Cassie!

He's mostly loyal but he's like Max from EastEnders - usually there but can stray!

I see. But with the "stay with your sister when she dies" was quite a harsh thing to say!

Did I write that? I forger what I write! I'm going to read it all through!

It's not word-perfect, but it's about Dina staying with Nina- "she'll need you there when she dies"

I can't believe I wrote that! That is well harsh! I guess I was acting it out in my head!

I know what you mean! All my ideas come from when I'm daydreaming! And I'm a bit of a fan of de ja vu (chapter 6 )

That is so horrible about being by Nina's bedside! That's why I wrote that she disappered! To get Dina (and the readers) more scared!

I have to say firsthand- it worked! *Shudder*

It sort of scared me writing the bit about her running through the hospital even though I knew what would happen!

Hey!
How are you Jim?

AsherEire

Good! There won't be an part of my fanon today :( Sorry! There will be today's one tomorrow though!

No problem. What happened? Today was supposed to be the Alex and Lilith part right?

I couldn't figure out the wording for it but it will be up tonight!

It has been transferred! Ta-daa!

Yay!

So anyway, you were saying?

Me and my ex-gf are really good friends!

Cool. I've never actually been in a relationship before so :(

I'm only 13 and I've had two girlfriends!

I like this girl at school though! I don't think she likes me back though!

Ouch... I don't like anyone and probably vice-versa.

Hah! Wow! Opposite alert!

I've got a friend who's crazy about Liam Payne... You won't believe how annoying that gets!

My ex likes him!

O_o She goes on and on... I have to supportive... she wants him badly... in reality, she has as much chance as Angela Pleasant becoming real... Haha. There's always a small chance though...

Tiny chance!

You never know though... anyway, been thinking, TPF is going to last a year right? APS is probably going to go on for about a few months. Then I'll create some side-stories in the fan fiction page instead of the chapters, like a Christmas special and some stuff on the Lothario twin's childhood. How does that sound?

That sounds good! TPF might go on for even longer than a year! At least a year! When we get there, I'll make an executive decision and either finish it or carry on with it!

Anyway, I've got the ending sorted out- but what goes in between I will think about. I don't want my series to go on too long because I'll eventually run out of ideas. Better to keep it short and sweet with me.

I'll get ideas from somewhere! The Big Push is coming tomorrow!

Can't wait! I was thinking possibly doing a Christmas special- with one of the happy families! But since I've muddled the age differences (a seventeen year difference between Cassie and Alex) I'll have to do side-stories that tie into the main plot once APS has ended. They'll be like prequels and stuff, like Alex's childhood, or Cassandra and Don's wedding and how they met! Thinking about it now, I can't wait to start it- A Pleasant Story, but with Dan and Mary-Sue etc as kids! :D

That's a good idea! In mine, Morty, Bella, Kaylynn, Dan, Brandi, Skip and Malcolm Landgraab all went to school together!

That sounds pretty good. But maybe Bella and Mortimer are/should be elders in TS2, so maybe they are college students, when the others would be early secondary school age, like year 7 or 8?

I didn't get Maxis' version where nothing was said about their school life but Kaylynn is in Sims 3, the same age as Morty, Bella and Malcolm Langeraab so I've added Daniel into it for continuity but I like that Mary-Sue and Cass are friends because it adds more depth into her and Dan! Like if he was much older than her than Herb and Coral would have a reason not to know him!

EA did mess up on Kaylynn's age, so everyone now thinks she got access to the Elixir of Life... it's confusing!

Do you want some more spoilers?

Ooh! Yes please Jim! Just don't go crazy, OK?

I'll start a small new section!

She said she's going to wake me and the other 2 people up at 5 in the morning so we can sing happy birthday to her because she was born at exactly 5 in the morning!

I see! In the meantime, I'm practisng for a musical performance for my school fete on Friday. I play guitar! ^_^ I've been teaching myself for year.

SPOILER ALERT!
So, Cass and Alex go to the scan to see her baby and Cass sees a flash of red outside the window and when Cass is paying for it, Alex sees Bella's face by the entrance and then the part ends with Bella.

But then doesn't she appear at the wedding and Mortimer re-marries her?

Yeah, exactly! Cass and Alex don't tell anyone about it and think that it is a delusion.

Crafty.

I know!

I realised Mortimer is all on his own at the moment, so maybe Bella could have been abducted, but returns thanks to PT9 Smith and the Dreamer Boys! Oops- spoiler!

What I've been thinking is that Dina saw Morty and thought he was rich, so she went after him but found out that he was married to Bella so she got in touch with PT7 and got her abducted. Mortimer wanted to get Bella back and he knew about Dina's heritage so he pretended to love her to find out about it. He would find out and be angry with her after Bella makes a scene at the wedding.

Nice. Or nasty. Anyway, I've got a surprise for you. Click and Votes here. :) It's on the Wiki, but I couldn't do an internal link.

OMFG!! Thank you!! I don't think people will vote for me though. :(

Oh I think they will! You do realise on the fanon portal, the stories are in order of the most views and yours is at the top of the list!

Wow! I, um! I didn't think that would happen in a million years!

Well it happened in a few weeks! The same thing has happened with a few of my chapters. Lilith's Makeover is the most viewed, but I think it has something to do with the pictures... :L

Lilith's Makeover is very good!

Thank you! But I was thinking more the pictures than the actual writing!! Now whenever Lilith is mentioned, I think of my Lilith, not the default!

Hehehe!

Nearly a year with the new Lilith does that to you!

LOOL!

I've noticed APS is too happy! That's about to change next chapter!

Mine changes a lot! Last story was happy, Brandi's will be sad!

Sad? I thought "painful" would be a better word...

Yeah! Painful or excruciatingly painful!

That's an understatement... XD

Yeah!

Kaylynn, in APS, is pregnant, so the story's like another repeat of Tommy's life- no father from birth.

Who's the daddy?

Kaylynn's late husband, the work friend of John Hutchworth...

Ah! WAIT... HUSBAND?!?!?!?

Trying not to laugh here- I have tweaked Maxis' storyline.... Wait, I'm not supposed to say that! Ahem, Donnie Lothario inherited his father's charm and he is the father... LOL! Yeah... Kaylynn got a husband, and he died, and yeah... goods friends with Daniel... yeah... and stuff...

Yeah.. stuff.

Trust me, as the guys and gals get older, some of them might make some stupid mistakes... some of those might get resolved! Some.

SOME NOT ALL!!!!

Donnie, perhaps... And maybe, well, Dustin. No more on the matter!

Dustin should get a happy ending!

He might, but not without some trouble first! I haven't mentioned what he does for a living yet?

No! He doesn't sell himself does he? I might do a story about that for Angela.

Heck no! I was thinking more... theft. Maybe he could be forced to burgle Mona's house?

But he likes Mona?

But Gordon King forces him! It's for the job, or they'll turn on him!

I getcha!

APS chapter 10 will be out tomorrow! ^_^ I'm so excited even though I'm writing it and I know what's going to happen! And there will be a special fan fiction celebrating the one month anniversary! I know it's not much, but APS is about 1/2 or 1/3 through its life!

Don't tell me! Have you seen my new avi?

What? The Bella Goth in TS3? Yes I have! Awesome!

She's what I was telling you ages ago! The girl who made her is great! I've got all of the ones she's made: Dan, Mary-Sue, Angie, Lily, Kaylynn, Morty, Bells, Cass, Alex, Michael, Darren, Dirk, Jennifer, John and Lucy! She's made a lot!

They are soooo cool! I've done similar, but for TS2 for the PSP! ^_^

Want to see Lilith's one?

I think I've seen it... Anyway:

TS2 Lilith= Fairly gothic

TS3 Custom Lilith= Complete gothic rebel

APS Custom Lillith= Tomboyish... ^_^

You've got it! Sexy clothes, thick eyeliner etc!

I think, in Dirk's eyes, not mine (thankfully) Lilith will always be sexy, regardless of her attitude. ;)

She's one of the best looking sims in the game! Cassandra's the most good-looking, then Bella, then Lilith!

If you say so... I think Dustin's probably the cutest guy. Wouldn't Lilith and Angela almost be tied considering they're identical twins?

Yeah, either him or Darren Dreamer! Maybe! I guess it depends! I like Angela but I think that Lilith is beautiful inside and out while Angela is only pretty outside!

Guess you like the bad girls? But Dustin, I know he's a criminal, but he's had it so hard and deep down, he's really innocent. He's MINE! :P

My ex did nearly get arrested for robbery! I'd prefer Cassandra out of the Pleasantview girls though!

Woah... Cassie's the best! Just for the record, I don't like trouble makers, but Dustin= <3 Mona's so lucky. I'm jealous now.

Cassie's naturally beautiful!!

If only I knew someone who had the same personality as Dustin... I don't :( And yes, Cass is.

This is getting a bit awkward! Let's change the subject: The Big Push might be early since I've got a sleepover to got to at 7!

Cool! Mine might be out about 3.30 to 4.00 ish.

Cool! I should have enough time to view it before I go to her house!

^_^ Hope you'll enjoy it in advance!

Oh I will!

Anyway, a bit of a coincidence- I was born at 05.47 PM (17.47) on 3rd February. Haha! Almost the sime time as Junior, but twelve hours and a few years earlier! XD

Wow!

^_^ I was reading and I thought "Wait a minute! If that isn't on the 24 hour clock, that's the time I was born! Nice try Skip, but it's my time!

I'm actually at the sleepover now! I went home with her today! I'm on her computer right now!

Sweet. Tell her I say "hi!"

She's 13 tomorrow!!

Say "happy birthday" from me as well!

Done dat!

Done what? You've lost me... :)

Said happy b-day!

Yay! There won't be an APS chapter this Friday... :(


 * I think you might be uspet?? I'll tell you why- I've got a school fete and I said I'd help out with a stall and perform with a friend. There's a perfect reason! I'll try getting it up in the evening or on Saturday!
 * I think you might be uspet?? I'll tell you why- I've got a school fete and I said I'd help out with a stall and perform with a friend. There's a perfect reason! I'll try getting it up in the evening or on Saturday!

Link for your fanon
I will put your fanon link here: Fanon:The Pleasantview Files, yeah it is red link but it will be restored when your block end and you want to continue it. Wiryawan310 17:42, March 22, 2012 (UTC)