Fanon:Adeline Aquino-Begino/Review

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Bakerychaz
I liked the fanon, but there are some issues that need to be fixed. One is that in her information on the right, you have put mother and father but you don't need to do that. It should be  and  not  (father) and  (mother). Another problem is that you don't need to put the parents' genders on either (you just use those gender icons for siblings, not parents) and you don't need to write adopted brother in brackets either, the icon explains it.

Mathetesalexandrou
Interesting Review Idea. I haven't read the fanon yet, but getting there. There were some unclear points: were you implying that the sim was based on a real-life counterpart? Nice screenshots though. Mathetesalexandrou 02:15, February 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * No, this sim is not based on a real-life counterpart (are you reading the Trivia section). And thanks for praising my screenshots. ThomasWikia Main 07:05, February 14, 2012 (UTC)