Fanon:A Sim's Tale: Book 2: Difference between revisions

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"Okay then, I think I should go right now, I have a part-time job" Enrico said looking at his watch. "You have a part-time job?" Mortimer asked. "Yes, I have a part-time job in the grocery store," Enrico explained "See you tomorrow, guys!". He then leaved the school and went to the grocery store.
 
"Man, it's so hot right now" Enrico said wiping his sweat with his handkerchief. Enrico then stopped for a moment and looking at his handkerchief, it was the one given by Leona. He suddenly remembered the day when Leona kissed him after he saved her from bullies. "Oh man, since that day, I'm always thinking about Leona..." Enrico thought "It feels like... my old feeling on her has been resurfaced."
 
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''It was teneleven years ago in Twinbrook, the Delgados just arrived. The young Enrico Delgado was so happy with their new home. "Hey dad, can I go to the park right now?" he asked. "Well, sure, you can go there while waiting for us to unpack our stuff" Bob said. "Great! Let's go Annie!" Enrico said happily.''
 
''However, when Enrico was about to cross the road, another child appeared riding a rollerskate. "Hey! Watch out!" the child yelled, but Enrico failed to notice and the two collided. "OUCH!" both fell to the ground. "A-ah, I'm sorry, are you okay?" Enrico stood up and checked on the child with rollerskate. "I'm... I'm okay" the child said "I should be the one who apologize." "A girl?" Enrico could noticed that the child was a girl from her voice.''
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''Back to present time, in the Redfield house''
 
"Jean, Leona, can I ask your favor?" Lily asked. "What is it mom?" Jean asked. "Can one of you go to the grocery store to buy some ingredients, it's almost dinner time" Lily said. "Well, maybe I can" Leona volunteered "I also want to buy some new shampoo".
 
"Well, if that's so, here the buy list and the money." Lily said giving Leona the buy list and some simoleons. "Don't forget the exchange" she said again. "Sure mom" Leona said before leaving.
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[[File:Enrie_Leona_moment1.jpg|thumb|200px|Leona stared at Enrico]]
 
After several minutes, Leona finally done shopping. "Thanks for everything Enrie" she said. "No problem Leona" Enrico said. Leona then gazed into Enrico's eyes, making him blush. "W-what's wrong? Is there something on my face" Enrico asked nervously.
 
"Nothing but, I think you really changed" Leona said "Unlike when you were child, you slightly... matured". "Oh really, ha ha ha! Y-yeah, everyone said that" Enrico laughed "And yeah, I think you also changed, no one expected that a tomboyish girl like you can be this... feminine". "Really? Well, actually, I'm still tomboy you know" Leona said. The two then laughed.
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