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Sunset Valley’s new mayor John Redfield was seen reading a newspaper in his room when someone knocked his door. It was his secretary. “Mr. Mayor, your guest is here” John’s secretary said. “Well, let him in” John ordered.
 
[[File:John_and_Walter.jpg|thumb|left|200px|John and Walter]]“Johny“Johnny, long time no see!” a tall, muscular middle-aged man entered the room. “Walter, long time no see buddy!” John said giving friendly hug to him. The name was Walter West, John’s old friend when he was in high school. He was SimNation’s legendary rock star.
 
“How’re you doing right now after you retired from music indutryindustry?” John asked. “Well, actually I’m not really retired from music industry, I’m only retired from my band” Walter explained “Now, I’m a manager of a band called '''The Frightful Four'''”.
 
“The Frightful Four? You mean the band which made their magnificent debut two months ago That’s cool!” John said “I’m a fan of them! I never know that you are their manager”. “Ha ha, thanks for supporting The Frightful Four dude” Walter said.
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Back to the school.
 
“Excuse me, how I can sign up for join this music club?” Chris asked to a senior student. “Oh you can talk to the club advisoradviser, Mr. Edward there” the student said. “Oh, Okay thanks” Chris said.
 
After talking to the club advisoradviser and received a registration form...
 
'''PING!!!'''
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==Chapter 3: Sandi French==
[[File:AST3_Darlene.jpg|thumb|left|200px|Darlene Bunch]]The school was ended. Everyone went to their respective homes, hweverhowever, Chris and Charlie decided to went to the Consignment Store for a while.
 
“Good afternoon Darlene!” Chris said greeting Darlene Bunch, who worked as a cashier in the store. “Oh hello Chris, is there anything I can help?” Darlene asked. “Yeah, I want to buy a new guitar” Chris said. “Okay, here” Darlene said giving Chris a guitar “It’s all 36 Simmoleons”. Chris then took the money from his wallet and gave it to Darlene.
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A pair of twin young adult women were seen entering a coffee shop. They were Leona and Jean Redfield. They currently in their second year as college student. After took a seat, Jean took and turned her laptop on while Leona reading the menu.
 
“So, what do you want?” Leona asked. “One Arabica coffee plese”please” Jean said. “And what about the meal?” Leona asked again. “Nah, I’m just want to drink” Jean said. “Well if that so” Leona said, she then called the waiter and begun to ordered the drinks. “One Arabica coffee, one cappuccino with chocolate swirl, and oh, I also want this Chocolate brownie” Leona said.
 
“Okay” The waiter said.
 
Ten minutes later, the waiter returned with an Arabica coffee, a cappucinocappuccino, and one Chocolate brownie. “Are these already all, miss?” the waiter. “Yeah, thank you” Leona said “By the way, here’s some tips for you. “Okay, thanks, enjoy your time!”.
 
“So, how’s your paper?” Leona asked, eating her Chocolate brownie.
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“You know Bella, it’s been two years since we enrolled in this university and haven’t meet our other friends yet, I wonder how’re they doing right now” Leona said, “Hey, how’re Mortimer and Malcolm in Sim State University?”.
 
[[File:AST3_Mortimer.jpg|thumb|left|200px|Mortimer's photo]]“Well, since Mortimer is my boyfriend so I always knew what he’s doing right now” Bella said “He often contact me. Yesterday he sent me this” Bella showed a photo of Mortimer in her cellphone. “What the... Ha ha ha, is that Mortimer? He has a moustachemustache now!” Leona said laughing. “Yeah, but he’s still handsome right” Bella said “Speaking about boyfriend, how’s Enrico doing? Is he still in training in the Sunset-Valley’s police academy right now?”.
 
“Several days ago, he told me that his six months training already ended, he’s a traffic cop right now” Leona said. “Really? That’s great!” Bella exclaimed. “Yeah, I was so happy when heard it. After two years waiting, he finally got his chance to join the Law EnfocementEnforcement career” Leona said “As you know, he was working in grocery store before finally enrolled in the academy”.
 
“Yeah I know that” Bella said “Oh I also have some news about Kaylynn in Academia Le Toure. It seems that she now engaged with her professor” Bella said. “Really? Wait, they’re on relationship for these whole times?” Leona asked. “Well, I don’t know about the detail, but when Kaylynn sent me a picture of her fiance, I surprised that he’s still young and yeah, I admit he’s handsome too, she said that her professor is somewhat popular among the girls there” Bella said. “When will they mariedmarried?” Leona asked curiously. “She said they might married after she graduated” Bella answered.
 
“Hey Dina also called me yesterday, it seemed that she and Nina enjoyed their time in their university, and as usual, they still flirt with guys, Dina even had many boyfriends” Leona said “Well, yeah, some things never changed”. “I always wonder what major they take in their university”. “They both in Fine Art major if I recall” Leona said.
 
“The only person we lost contact with is...” Bella said. “Yeah, Alex Curtiz” Leona said “It’s been four and half years since he moved out from Sunset VellyValley to Roaring Heighs, we even don’t know where or what is he doing right now”. “Jean must be missed him so much” Bella said, Leona only nodded.
 
“It might surprising if he also enrolled in this university and suddenly appear before us” Bella said. “But he’s not” Leona said.
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In the next morning.
 
“Ah, I’m stuffed” Charlie said after eating his breakfast. “So, Charlie, do you already join an afterschoolafter school activity yet?” John asked. “Well, I don’t know dad, I can’t decided yet. I want to join the art club, but also interested in music club like Chris” Charlie said. “Why don’t you just join both? The school allow you to join two afterschoolafter school activities” Chris said “Considering you have skill in painting and you also can play drum”.
 
“Well, I will consider that” Charlie said.
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[[File:AST_3_dining_room_scene.jpg|thumb|left|Chris was excited after learn that his favorite rock star wanted to meet him.]]
 
“By the way Chris, yesterday my old friend, a band manager told me that he wanted to meet you after I show him your video on SimTube” John said. “Your friend? Band manager? who?” Chris asked. “His name is Walter West, a former rock star” John said. “Wa-Wa-Walter-WlaterWalter West?” Chris surprised “That Walter West? The legendary rock star in his era who is now the manager of The Frightful Four!? WALTER BENJAMIN WEST!?”. “You know him?” John said.
 
“Of course I know him dad! He’s one of my favorite rock stars! His songs are really... Oh my God... How I can say this? I just like them!” Chris said in excitement. “Well, good to hear that, I never know that the current generation also knew about him” John said “So when can you meet him?”. “Tonight! Please, make it tonight!” Chris said. “Oh, okay, I will contact him, he’s currently in Sunset Valley’s hotel right now” John said. “Oh YEEEES! Charlie, please hit me, I can’t believe I will meet a legendary rock star!” Chris said.
 
“Errr, I admit that his songs are good. But for me, they are very old-fashioned, not really hardcore” Charlie commented “Well, he’s an old generation afterall”after all”.
 
“Hey, I think your bus is already here” Lily said after heard a honking noise. “Well, I guess we will go to school now” Chris said. “Okay, take care” Lily and John said.
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09.00 A.M.
 
Chris’ first class was math class. “Ugh, I hate math” Chris grumbled. Chris then looked out of the window. “It seems it will rain” he thought. “Good morning Chris”, someone greeted him, it was Tamera, who took a seat next to him. “Oh, good morning Tamera” Chris greeted Tamera back. Chris then looked at Tamera. “''AwwAw man, she’s so cute''” he thought.
 
“Is there something wrong?” Tamera asked. “Oh nothing, I’m just. Well I think, you are... very beautiful today” Chris said. “Oh, really? Thank you” Tamera said, smiling.
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Later, a good-looking teenage boy entered the class with fancy outfit. The class was quiet for a moment, until...
 
“KYAAAAAAA“AAAAAAAAAH! Lance Lewis! It’s Lance Lewis!” a girl suddenly screamed hysterically, followed by others. The class became so noisy.
 
“Lance Lewis? You man that guy is Lance Lewis? That pop teen idol!?” Chris, Sam, and other male students had their jaw dropped.
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“Are you sure you don’t wanna watch a movie with me tonight? I will treat you” Lance said “Oh, maybe we can dine at the Bistro after that, and...”. “OKAY THAT’S ENOUGH!” Chris yelled, surprising everyone in the corridor. “Chris?” Tamera said, she confused about Chris who suddenly became upset. “Let’s go to our next class, Tamera!” Chris said, pulling Tamera’s arm again. “Hey, Chris, wait!”.
 
As the two left, a smirk could be seen in Lance’s face. “Hmph“Hmp, that Chris guy is really interesting” he thought.
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“Chris, hey, hey! STOP!” Tamera said. Chris then stopped. Tamera looked at him in annoyance “What the heck is wrong with you?” she asked.
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John was fell asleep in his room when his cellphone ringing, surprising him. “GREAT WOOLLY LLAMAS!” John said in surprise, he even fell from his chair. He then took his cellphone and answered the call.
 
“Johny“Johnny it’s me” the voice on the phone said, it was Walter’s. “Oh, hello Walter, what’s up?” John asked. “Have you already talk to your son that I want to meet him?” Walter asked. “Oh, oh yeah, I have talk to him” John said, “and guess what, he really excited since it appears he’s your big fan”. “Really? Good to hear that, ha ha” Walter said “So when I can meet him?”.
 
“Oh, Chris said he want to meet you tonight” John said. “Tonight? Okay, tonight I will visit your home, and, oh, you haven’t give me your adress”address” Walter said. “Oh, yes, here my adressaddress...” John said, giving his adressaddress to Walter. “Okay thanks, see you again tonight” Walter said hanging up the phone.
 
A moment later, someone knocked John’s door.
 
“Come in!” John said. Later, John’s secretary entered his office with a pizza delivery guy. “Sir, did you order a pizza?” she asked. “Oh, yeah I oderedordered them” John said. “Here’s your pizza sir” the pizza guy said “Mushroom pizza with extra onions and mozzarella cheese, it’s all 24 simmoleons”.
 
“Okay, here’s your money... and oh, a little tips for you” John said giving the pizza guy the money. “Thanks sir, enjoy your pizza!”the pizza guy said before leaving the room.
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“No idiot, that was for me!” the second girl said.
 
“On your dream you flat-chest! He’s wingkingwinking to me!” the third girl said.
 
“Hey, all of you get out!” a teacher “You disturb this audition!”. “B-but sir!” one of the girl, named Vicky Toadstool protested, followed by the other girls.
“Girls... Calm down” Lance said using the microphone, calming down the girls only with few words. “Ohhh“Oh, he’s so charming” Vicky said.
 
“Oh, okay, very well Mr. Lewis, you can start” Mr. Edward said “And for you girls, you can watch if you want but DO NOT be so noisy, okay?”. “Okay sir” the girls said in unison.
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"Really? That's great!" Chris said "Yeah, I have some friends who has talent in music, including my brother Charlie, he's very good in drum!".
 
"Great, if you need more informationsinformation about the competition, you can call me anytime" Walter said, "You can ask my number from your father".
 
"Sure" Chris said.
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[[File:AST_VJ_Alvi.jpg|thumb|200px|VJ Alvi!]]Spencer Funke was scared. The street punk, VJ Alvi pulled him into an alley between the Theater and the Grocery Store. He then forcibly took the young boy’s wallet.
 
“Please, don’t!” Spencer cried, “I need the money to buy a medicine for my sister!”. “Yeah yeah” VJ said “And I need your money to buy some cigarretescigarettes and drinks”.
 
“Please don’t take my money plese!” Spencer said begging.
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“Y-yeah, thank you” Charlie said.
 
[[File:CharlieXsandi_kiss.jpg|thumb|right|200px|Charlie and Sandi kissed.]] Sandi then smiled at Charlie. “You are so brave...” she said. She then held Charlie’s arm, “You risked your life to save that child and then, to protect me. Thank you”.
 
“...” Charlie didn't said anything, his face was blushed.
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“...” Tamera said nothing, she was stunned. She was too shocked seeing Chris suddenly enraged.
 
“Im“I'm sorry Chris, but I will win our bet! Ha ha ha!” Lance proclaimed, laughing very hard, “You lose, you will never get her as your girlfriend!”.
 
“SHUT UP!” Chris yelled.
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Chris then turned his head, he found that it was Charlie who stopping him. “Bro, don’t” Charlie said. Not only Charlie, Sam and Ariana were also there.
 
[[File:Lance_and_co_2.jpg|thumb|200px|Lance and his band]]Later, Lance’s band members also appeared. The two bands finally face-to-face.
 
“Well, maybe we should focus more to our competition” Lance said, “But I doubt you won’t be able to concentrate after this, ha ha ha”.
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[[File:YA_Redfield_twins.jpg|thumb|left|200px|Leona and Jean prepared to return to the University]]07.00 P.M.
07.00 P.M.
 
After the dinner, the Redfields gathered in the front yard. Enrico also there too. "Take care of yourselves" Lily said hugging Leona and Jean. "Sure mom" Jean said, "You guys too". "See you later Enrie" Leona said holding her boyfriend, Enrico. "Oh, Take care" Enrico said in awkward tone. "Don't worry son I will pretend that I don't see anything" John said teasing Enrico, "Ha ha, so funny dad" Leona said, everyone then laughed.
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Chris and Charlie looked at their surrounding, they looked search for something. "That's strange, she said that she will pick up us here" Chris said. "Who?" Sam asked curiously. Just before Chris could answer Sam's question, someone called him.
 
[[File:Blond_Annie_1.jpg|thumb|200px|Annie]]"Chris!" a beautiful young woman ran approaching the teenagers. She wore white cropped top and black jeans, her long hair dyed in blond. It was Annie Delgado, the famous actress, as well as Enrico Delgado's sister. Sam was stunned seeing a famous actress stood in front of them.
 
"Am I late?" Annie asked "Sorry, I just had a meeting with my producer and...". "It's okay Annie, we are just arrived too" Chris said, "By the way, I would love to introduce you to Ariana and Sam, our band members".
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"Oh, that's so unfortunate" Annie said. "Do you have a plan to enroll in University too, Ms. Delgado?" Ariana asked. "I'm not sure" Annie answered "I already decided that I want to focus on my career first". "I see..." Ariana said again.
 
After twenty minutes drive, they arrived in Annie's apartment. "Welcome to my apartment" she said. The room was so big and the interior was so beautiful. "Whoa, it's so big" Sam said in awe, "I still can not believe we stay at a celebrity's house". "Hahaha, It's not my house, I just rent it" Annie said laughing, "Okay, now I will show you your rooms".
 
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