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{{Title|[[Fanon:Revolution|Revolution]] - Episode 1: Awakening <sub>by [[User:WikiBuilder1147|WikiBuilder1147]]</sub>}}
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{{Disclaimer|Some content in this narrative is '''not suitable for children under the age of thirteen years''', as it contains some violence and coarse language. '''Caution is advised.'''}}
{{Fan fiction
|image = [[File:Awakeningcover.png|250px]]
|name = Awakening
|genre = Drama, Action, Adventure, Scifi
|rating = PG (Australia) PG-13 (US) 15 (UK)
|creator = [[User:WikiBuilder1147|WikiBuilder1147]]
|originalrun = 17 June - 20 July 2014
|proceeded = [[Fanon:Outset|Outset]]
|status =
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'''Awakening''' is the first episode of the [[Fanon:Revolution|Revolution]] series by [[User:WikiBuilder1147|WikiBuilder1147]]. It depicts the adventures of a group of youngsters
==Chapter 1==
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The boy entered the bathroom next door, looking at the mirror. His hair was all over the place. With a tsk-tsk, he turned on the tap before placing his head under the stream of water. He shouted in pain as the cold sensation created by the water ran down his spine, electrifying every nerve. He withdrew his head promptly, quickly drying his hair with a towel. He removed a toothbrush and a tube of toothpaste from a cup next to the sink, and he squeezed some toothpaste carefully onto the brush.
[[File:Awakening2.jpg|thumb|left|250px|"He removed a toothbrush and a tube of toothpaste from a cup next to the sink, and he squeezed some toothpaste carefully onto the brush."]]
After brushing thoroughly, he turned the water back on to wash the brush out. No water came.
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"Oi! Slowcoach! Stand up!" the teacher screamed, pointing at the boy. He stood up, bracing himself for the carnage to come. Rilkins stormed up to his prey.
[[File:Awakening4.jpg|thumb|left|250px|"Did I not say ''TEN'' seconds?"]]
''Slap!''
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The history teacher stood facing the class with her large pointer, her round glasses far too large for her small, glassy eyes. Her impoverished form made her look like she would fold in on herself any second.
[[File:Awakening5.jpg|thumb|250px|"Her impoverished form made her look like she would fold in on herself any second."]]
"...when the Rebellion was quelled towards the end of the Great Drought, the disgraced leaders were shamefully executed in front of the cheering populace, who were all screaming in joy as the Government's full power was restored..."
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"No, Miami," Ben replied. "You need to stay awake!"
[[File:Awakening6.jpg|thumb|left|250px|"You need to stay awake!"]]
"Ugh," Miami groaned in disgust. "Bite me." She turned her head away from Ben and resumed sleeping.
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"Great," one boy said. "More--"
[[File:Awakening7.jpg|thumb|250px|"He didn't have time to finish his sentence."]]
He didn't have time to finish his sentence. The teacher forced the boy to the ground. His victim's body slammed against the ground. Hard. The boy didn't move after that.
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''SLAP!''
[[File:Awakening8.jpg|thumb|left|250px|"The Government doesn't like mistakes
"The Government doesn't like mistakes!"
"No, sir!"
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"How dare you scream at us when all we've done is to be human and make mistakes! How dare you treat us like inferior beings and make our lives miserable like it's your job! Your job is to teach us things that will make us productive citizens of this country! Our job is to ''learn'' things that will make us productive citizens of this country, NOT to take your petty insults! You, Mr Rilkins, and all of your shameful colleagues, are fortunate that the stupid Government turns a blind eye to this nonsense, or else you would be in prison at this very moment! You are committing child abuse, and you say how dare ''me''? You, Mr Rilkins, are a '''CRIMINAL''', and so are all the 'teachers' in this '''''DAMN SCHOOL''''', and all the other '''''DAMN INDOCTRINATING INSTITUTES IN THIS DAMN COUNTRY!'''''"
[[File:Awakening9.jpg|thumb|250px|"You, Mr RIlkins, are a '''CRIMINAL!''']]
Rilkins was speechless for a few moments, then grinned evilly once again.
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==Chapter 4==
All of this was too much for Ben, who started speeding up into a run
▲All of this was too much for Ben, who started speeding up into a run, sprinting away from the presently abundant gossip.
''Why, Miami? Why?'' was his only thought at the time. Ben ran into his classroom, where for once he felt a small measure of safety. The bell rang, bringing near-silence to the halls thereafter. Students filed into the classroom, preparing themselves for Mr Rilkins' screaming orders.
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"HEY!" the teacher screamed. "GET BACK HERE!"
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'''''[[Fanon:Outset|To be continued...]]'''''
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==Special thanks==
*[[User:K6ka|K6ka]], for helping me come up with ideas for the story.
[[Category:Episodes from Revolution]]
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