Fanon:Don's conquests: Difference between revisions

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But looking into Nina's big green eyes made him wonder.
 
They had a romantic dinner conversation and Nina went home around quarter to 9, wichwhich didn't leave Don much time to prepare for his next date, but the romantic setting was already there, so all Don had to do was clean up so that Ivy wouldn't guess that he had an other date just before.
 
Ivy arrived a few minutes late, but Don didn't mind, as long as it wasn't one hour late, like Cassandra once did. He invited her in and they started dinner. Don didn't stop flirting with her for the whole meal.
 
Once they were finished eating he invited her up to the terrace, wichwhich was his usual move. They watched the stars and Don tryedtried to kiss her, and just as there lips were about to touch, wheshe pushed him away.
 
'''''You'll have to try much harder than that if you want to seduce me! '''''she said.
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'''''Call me so that we can see each other again. '''''He said while as he waited for a taxi with her. The taxi arrived and just as she was about to close the door she said: '''''I will!'''''
 
Don waited until the taxi disapearddisappeared and he walked back into his house.
 
'''''pffPff! She doesn't think I can seduce her, well she hasn't met Don Lothario.''''' He mumbled to himself as he got himself a drink.
==Chapter III: Weding preparations==
 
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