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{{Fan fiction
|image=[[File:Ophelia's_Mind.jpg|200px]]
|name= Ophelia's Mind
|genre= Thriller
|creator= [[User:AsherÉire|AsherÉire]]
|rating= G
|numberofchapters= 8
|originalrun= 29 July 2012 - 3 August 2012
|status= Completed
|preceded= [[Fanon:Complications (A Pleasant Story)|Complications]]
|proceeded= [[Fanon:Insomnia|Insomnia]] (season 2 premiere)
}}
 
{{Property|AsherEire}}
 
'''Ophelia's Mind '''is a fanon written by [[User:AsherEireAsherÉire|AsherEireAsherÉire]]. It follows the mind-blowing discoveries of [[Olive Specter]] from the perspective of young orphan [[Ophelia Nigmos]]. It is canon with [[Fanon:A Pleasant Story|A Pleasant Story]], and the stories link together in the first chapter of Season 2.
 
{{Fan fiction
|image=[[File:Ophelia's_Mind.jpg|200px]]
|name= Ophelia's Mind
|genre= Thriller
|creator= [[User:AsherEire|AsherEire]]
|rating= G
|numberofchapters= 8
|originalrun= 29 July 2012 - 3 August 2012
|status= Completed
|preceded= [[Fanon:Complications|Complications]]
|proceeded= [[Fanon:Insomnia|Insomnia]] (season 2 premiere)
}}
 
 
'''Ophelia's Mind '''is a fanon written by [[User:AsherEire|AsherEire]]. It follows the mind-blowing discoveries of [[Olive Specter]] from the perspective of young orphan [[Ophelia Nigmos]]. It is canon with [[Fanon:A Pleasant Story|A Pleasant Story]], and the stories link together in the first chapter of Season 2.
 
==Characters==
'''[[Ophelia Nigmos]]'''- Ophelia is a young woman who was orphaned four years ago. Since then, she has lived with her aunt Olive and is about to discover some of her darkest secrets.
 
'''[[Olive Specter]]'''- Olive is the creepy woman of Strangetown. She has a graveyeard in her back garden, and Ophelia is forbidden to enter...
 
'''[[Johnny Smith]]'''- Johnny comes from an Alien-Sim hybrid family. He has been constantly picked on by Tank Grunt, and has onnlyonly found comfort and reassurance in his best friend, Ripp, and his girlfriend, Ophelia.
 
'''[[Ripp Grunt]]'''- Ripp has had it hard. His parents divorced five years ago, and 3 years ago, he lost contact with his mother. Will he ever find out why Lyla went dark on the Grunt Brothers?
 
'''[[Jenny Smith]]'''- Jenny is married to Pollination Technician #9 Smith. She often worries about the safety of her son because he is an easy target for bullies.
 
'''[[Pollination Technician #9 Smith]]'''- PT9 used to be one of the alien pollination technicians. Once he retired, he started a family. He has had the occasional disagreement with General Buzz Grunt, but Johnny and Tank hold the main Grunt-Smith feud.
 
'''[[General Buzz Grunt]]'''- the father of Ripp and Tank. He's had some disagreements with PT9 Smith, yet no one knows why.
 
'''[[Tank Grunt]]'''- the older brother of Ripp, He's a bit of a bully, and has beaten up Ripp multiple times.
 
'''Tank Grunt'''- the older brother of Ripp, He's a bit of a bully, and has beaten up Ripp multiple times.
==Chapter 1: Why?==
A lot of people would think I would be permanently depressed or reckless considering I've lost my parents. That's not the case. I'm very shy, and I prefer to stay out of people's way. People wonder why I took Johnny and Ripp under my wing. Johnny is constantly bullied, but he does the right thing and laughs it off. His parents are fully aware of the situation. Ever since we were 12, he hasn't been able to escape the bullying. Six years later, nothing's changed.
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''Ophelia, as soon as you get this, call me! It's really urgent!''
 
My mind leaps into action. I open up my list of contacts and scroll down to Ripp's name. I hit the call button and but the phone up to memy ear. After a few seconds, I hear Ripp's voice.
 
"Ophelia?"
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"Sure thing." I reply. I hang up and start to get ready, pulling on some shoes and a jumper. I can only hope Johnny is ok. Ripp said he was fine, but somehow I know something's not right. Maybe this will spark the Grunt-Smith feud into something bigger. I can only hope not.
 
==Chapter 4: Hospital Trip==
As soon as I get to the hospital, I'm greeted by Ripp. He takes me to the room Johnny and his parents are in. Johnny looks up and the pain vanishes from his face. I give a small smile to PT9 and Jenny, his parents. I sit next to Johnny and take his hand. When the doctor asks how Johnny gained this injury, I take a brief glance in Ripp's direction. He's blushing. I don't blame him. If I had a brother like him, I would be more than just embarrassed. Poor guy. Johnny manages to cover for him, and I'm sure I heard a small sigh of relief from Ripp.
 
When we're heading home, Ripp suddenly realises he's late. "If Dad catches me, I'm so dead..." PT9 speaks up. "That's OK, Ripp." he says "We're paying your father a visit." The colour drains from Ripp's face. He looks like a scared puppy. Perhaps Ripp is fearing another fight. Or maybe the General doesn't cope well with theesethese conversations.
 
We pull up to Ripp's place. Johnny, Ripp and PT9 all get out of the car and walk up to the front door. The door opens and they're taken inside.
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I'm prepared for this. "I'm listening" I reply. That's got him. I bet it's something big.
 
==Chapter 5: Trespassing==
Johnny was frozen. His eyes were pointing to the direction of his parents. I know what's up. He's not talking because of something his dad just found out. All this time, PT9 thought it had been an unprovoked assault. I don't think Johnny told them he started the fight. So now he's in a lot of trouble with his parents.
 
The car stops at my place. I get out and thank them for the ride, and walk up to the front door. I reach into the pockets and I realise I don't have a key to the front door. I'm not going to wake up Olive, but I really need to get in. I could go in through the back entrancewindow, but I donthink they't actually have are keylocked. Hm... I may need to stay outside for the night. Great.
 
I sitting on the pack porch, staring at this minatureminiature graveyard. Suddenly, temptation kicks in. I quietly rise, and walk towards the black gate, and open the latch. I slip through and walk up to one of the many gravestones. Inscribed into it'sits stone surface says "Here lies Earl E. Demise". Wait, that's one of Olive's husbands! And move to another. It says "Here lies Rigger Mortis". Another one of Olive's husbands, but I'm sure she didn't have this many husbands! And another says "Here lies Ichabod Specter". Ok, I'm getting really freaked out... those are all of Olive's husbands, but who are all these other people? I move to the others. There are different names that I don't recognise, like Melissa Sims, and such. Then I go to another stone and the name on it makes my blood run cold.
 
It's says "Here lies Lyla Grunt".
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'''''Hey Ophelia,'''''
 
'''''Ripp told me to forward this mesagemessage in case his internet crashed again and you didn't get the message:'''''
 
''Hey Johnny/Ophelia.''
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That was the last Johnny and I ever saw of Robert "Ripp" Grunt. At least, for a while.
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