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{{Fan fiction
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|name= Ophelia's Mind
|genre= Thriller
|creator= [[User:AsherEire|AsherEire]]
|rating= G
|numberofchapters= ?
|originalrun= 29 July 2012 -???
|status= Unfinished/in production
|preceded= [[Fanon:Complications|Complications]]
|proceeded= TBA
}}
 
 
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'''Ripp Grunt'''- Ripp has had it hard. His parents divorced five years ago, and 3 years ago, he lost contact with his mother. Will he ever find out why Lyla went dark on the Grunt Brothers?
 
'''Jenny Smith'''- Jenny is married to Pollination Technician #9 Smith. She often worries about the safety of her son because he is an easy target for bullies.
 
'''Pollination Technician #9 Smith'''- PT9 used to be one of the alien pollination technicians. Once he retired, he started a family. He has had the occasional disagreement with General Buzz Grunt, but Johnny and Tank hold the main Grunt-Smith feud.
==Chapter 1: Why?==
A lot of people would think I would be permanently depressed or reckless considering I've lost my parents. That's not the case. I'm very shy, and I prefer to stay out of people's way. People wonder why I took Johnny and Ripp under my wing. Johnny is constantly bullied, but he does the right thing and laughs it off. His parents are fully aware of the situation. Ever since we were 12, he hasn't been able to escape the bullying. Six years later, nothing's changed.
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"Sure thing." I reply. I hang up and start to get ready, pulling on some shoes and a jumper. I can only hope Johnny is ok. Ripp said he was fine, but somehow I know something's not right. Maybe this will spark the Grunt-Smith feud into something bigger. I can only hope not.
==Chapter 4: Hospital Trip==
As soon as I get to the hospital, I'm greeted by Ripp. He takes me to the room Johnny and his parents are in. Johnny looks up and the pain vanishes from his face. I give a small smile to PT9 and Jenny, his parents. I sit next to Johnny and take his hand. When the doctor asks how Johnny gained this injury, I take a brief glance in Ripp's direction. He's blushing. I don't blame him. If I had a brother like him, I would be more than just embarrassed. Poor guy. Johnny manages to cover for him, and I'm sure I heard a small sigh of relief from Ripp.
 
When we're heading home, Ripp suddenly realises he's late. "If Dad catches me, I'm so dead..." PT9 speaks up. "That's OK, Ripp." he says "We're paying your father a visit." The colour drains from Ripp's face. He looks like a scared puppy. Perhaps Ripp is fearing another fight. Or maybe the General doesn't cope well with theese conversations.
 
We pull up to Ripp's place. Johnny, Ripp and PT9 all get out of the car and walk up to the front door. The door opens and they're taken inside.
 
It's been half an hour since they went inside. I have to say, it's kind of awkward to be with your boyfriend's mum. Jenny has been trying to keep the conversation flowing, but in the end, I'm not in the mood.
 
After another fifteen minutes, Johnny and his dad return. "So," I say "what's the situation?" Johnny turns to me.
 
"Well... it's a long story."
 
I'm prepared for this. "I'm listening" I reply. That's got him. I bet it's something big.
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