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{{Title|[[Fanon:Revolution|Revolution]] - Episode 7: Persuasion <sub>by [[User:WikiBuilder1147|WikiBuilder1147]]</sub>}}
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"DANGEROUS INFERNO OF TREACHERY INCINERATES THOUSANDS!"
Ben rolled his eyes. He knew only around
He flipped through the paper, and eventually something caught his attention.
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==Chapter 2==
The four were back at the cave. It was
"Miami," said Harry, "You need to snap out of it! Hundreds have already been killed by the Government."
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"What do you mean?"
The two stood up.
"You're...you're meant to be the rebellious one, Miami," Ben said. "You're the one that's meant to break the rules."
[[File:Persuasion1.jpg|thumb|250px|right|"'You're...you're meant to be the rebellious one, Miami,' Ben said. 'You're the one that's meant to break the rules.'"]]
"People change, Ben."
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He raised his head to look Miami in the eye again. "Your family. They're...they're dead. Executed by the Government."
Miami's eyes dilated. She looked as if she had been stabbed in the heart
"No..." Miami gasped. "It can't be! NO!"
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"No…" Miami whispered again. "No…no, no, no…" A tear fell from her eye.
[[File:Hodgsonfamilyframecracked.png|thumb|250px|right|"My little brother...6 years old...had nothing to do with this...and he was killed as well?"]]
"My...my little brother...6 years old...had nothing to do with this," she mumbled. "And he was killed as well?"
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"Mum...Dad...Cedric...," she sobbed. "Dead..." She fell into Ben's arms. Her body bobbed up and down as she cried.
[[File:Persuasion2.jpg|thumb|250px|Her body bobbed up and down as she cried.]]
Slowly, however, the cries morphed into heavy breaths, and those into growls. They got progressively louder, to the point of frightening Ben.
"Uh... Miami? Are you alright?" he asked.
She didn't reply vocally. Rather, she burst out of Ben's hold. She held her head in despair as her growling continued to increase exponentially.
[[File:Persuasion3.jpg|thumb|250px|"She held her head in despair as her growling continued to increase exponentially."]]
"Cedric...," she moaned. She slowly moved her head upwards, and the vision of her face made Ben scoot away in fear; her face was getting progressively furred, her iris shifted from blue to yellow, and her canine teeth, normally quite short and stubby, was sharp like a wolf's. '''"CEDRIC!"''' Ben was knocked to the ground in Miami's outburst.▼
▲"Cedric...," she moaned. She slowly moved her head upwards, and the vision of her face made Ben scoot away in fear; her face was getting
"I'll..." she muttered. "I'll kill you! I'll kill you all! Government...I'm...COMING FOR YOU!"▼
Then her voice crescendoed into a roar. Her vocabulary devolved to that of a person from the Stone Age. "I...me...KILL! '''GOVERNMENT...ME...''COME...KILL YOU!!!'''''"
She sprinted out of the cave.
==Chapter 3==
"Miami! Come back!" Ben shouted as Miami shot out the cave. He ran out after her.
"Did you know…?" Harry asked.
"No…" Ben replied.
"Get in the car," Harry sighed. "We'll have to go after her…again."
Harry started the engine again and put it into top gear before racing off after Miami, who was this time running to destroy the Government.
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"Miami! Come back!" Ben hollered again as the car rushed down the dirt roads after Miami, whose maximum running speed had increased by around ten kilometres an hour. As the girl galloped down the path, Harry continued to press on the accelerator, forcing the jeep to move at increasingly whirlwind velocities.
"KILL ''ALL''!" Miami barked in a low voice. "YOU ALL '''PAY'''! YOU ALL '''''DIE'''''!"
As Miami tirelessly dashed towards her undefined destination, Ben, Alex and Harry bolted forward in their car. For tens of kilometres, Miami continued to sprint.
"Miami! Stop! They'll kill you!" cried Ben.
A border post, flanked by barbed-wire fences stretching infinitely into the distance, came into view. Ben began to panic.
On both fences, caution signs screamed, "WARNING: 2000 VOLTS."
He watched as two border guards began to empty their magazines upon her. She dodged each bullet, sending the guards into a panic as their guns stopped, refusing to fire further.
"DIE!" the beast screamed. "YOU ALL '''''DIE!!!'''''"
Then he looked on in utter horror as Miami leapt onto a guard's head, tearing it to shreds, before moving on to the next soldier. With both guards lying dead on the ground, Miami crashed through the post signifying that they had entered civilian space. The girl continued to charge forward. Several minutes later, she started to slow down. So did the jeep.
Eventually, Miami ground to a halt. The hair that was all over her body had once again disappeared. Her eyes had returned to their original blue colour. She collapsed to the ground in exhaustion and started sobbing again.
Ben exited from the vehicle and sprinted to Miami. He knelt down beside her and put his arms around his friend.
"I...I killed them...," Miami whimpered. "It's all my fault...they...died because of me...I've...''turned'' into one of them..." She gasped for air then continued to cry. "Cedric...Mum...Dad...Forgive me...'''''PLEEEEASE'''''..." The compassion within her had resurfaced. The reeducation had been reversed. She was herself again.
"Shh, it's okay…," he said as he rocked her back and forth to calm her. "It's okay, it's okay."
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'''''[[Fanon:Recruitment|To be continued…]]'''''
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