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It was getting dark. Edvin decided that they all sleep in the trees to be safe. They all climbed up, and soon fell asleep. The island was silent. No one heard the package parachute from the sky. No one heard the ticking from inside.
===Chapter 24
Karen Helgason awoke first. As she got up, she froze, only just remembering they were high up in a tree. Shaking the others, they woke up slowly. Arvid Oss was climbing down when he spotted it. High up in a tree opposite to theirs, a harpoon and two daggers. He knew he had to get them. Arvid jumped; and barely grabbed the branch. He scrambled up the tree, and was about to grab the weapons, when Cassidy Wrede screamed. A huge tidal wave was crashing through the jungle, destroying everything in it's path, and was heading their way. The wave hit Arvid's tree first. He only had time to see his brother, Edvin, fall into the rushing water, as he flushed out of the jungle.
Annie Tong woke up floating in sea water. Looking around, she noticed she was just at the edge of the jungle. Swimming back to her shipwreck, she noticed it was starting to float away. Heading into it, she grabbed her few possessions, her bow and arrows, her water bottle, and a few apples she had found, and headed out. As if by luck, Annie noticed a small lifeboat at the bottom of the shipwreck. Wondering how she had not spotted it earlier, she carefully lifted it out and set it onto the water. She put her items on board, and started rowing around the island, looking for others.
Holly Alto was struggling to stay above the water. VJ Alvi gave her a nearby branch to hold onto. It helped a little. The two stopped talking as they saw a girl rowing a life boat not so far away. The agreed to hijack the boat and swim away in it. When they were right beside it, VJ climbed on board. His weight made the boat unbalanced, and Annie Tong fell off, into the water. As VJ helped Holly onto the boat, a spear ripped through his chest. He fell face down into the ocean. Holly screamed. As she turned around, she saw Maximus McDermott standing on a floating log, with Patty Abe beside him. Holly jumped into the water, but before she could get away, Patty's knife lodged itself in her throat. Patty landed onto Annie's boat, and spotted someone swimming away from them. Maximus jumped after Annie Tong, and caught up to her. He held her under the water until she stopped moving. Maximus climbed onto the boat, and the two rowed away. Annie's lifeless body floated out to sea.
The water was rising. Michael Bachelor rose to the surface and headed to some logs that were wedged between some rocks. He climbed up and sat on them, thinking about what had happened. Suddenly he heard his name being called. He noticed Lisa Bunch swimming towards him, and he held out his hand to grab her. As he helped her up, a harpoon struck his heart. He fell forwards, onto Lisa. She pushed him off, and looked for his killer. Arvid Oss stood on a large rock, staring at Lisa. She took the ninja star she had found on the jungle floor out her pocket and threw it towards Arvid. It slit his throat and he fell into the ocean. The water around him turned scarlet. Lisa swam towards him and took two daggers out of his pockets. She swam away.
The island went silent. All that was heard was a ticking noise. Lisa saw them first. A boy and two girls. The boy was holding a box. The source of the ticking.
Bob Newbie stood with Laurel Grisby and Betty Simovitch on the last part of the island above sea level. In his hands held a bomb. A bomb that was set to go off in 5 minutes. Out of nowhere, Lisa Bunch grabbed the bomb and swam as fast as she could away from them. Laurel jumped in after her. Betty then saw Annie Tong's body float next to her, and stole her bow and arrows. Aiming carefully, she shot Lisa through the neck. As Laurel was about to reach the bomb, a rowboat sailed beside her and a boy put the bomb on the boat. As Laurel looked up, she saw it was Maximus McDermott. Her face filled with happiness when she saw him. Laurel held out her hand, so Maximus could pull her up, but Maximus ignored her and rowed the boat away. Laurel noticed a girl sitting beside him.
Karen Helgason rose to the surface. Screaming for the others, she noticed a girl and boy standing on the remaining part of the island. Looking around for something to use, she spotted a spear. Karen threw it, and it punctured the girl's leg, Betty Simovitch collapsed to the ground, with Bob rushing to help her. Karen silently swam over to them, and grabbed Bob's neck. The two wrestled on the ground, unitl Karen forced him into the ocean. The two kept fighting, while Betty bled out alone. Cassidy Wrede watched as Karen fought a boy in the ocean. She rushed in to help, but a silver arrow pierced her skull. Betty had managed to grab her bow, and aimed the next arrow at Karen. She fired, but Bob got in the way. Betty, managed to call his name before the arrow hit him. As Betty opened her eyes, she saw Bob swimming over to her, with Karen's body floating away. Bob had managed to move just in time, and now helped Betty with her leg.
Maximus knew he could use the bomb to his advantage. Him and Patty rowed quickly towards the centre of the now, fully sunken island. Halfway there, Patty screamed. Edvin Oss had jumped onto their boat. Before Maximus could attack him, Laurel Grisby closed her hands around his neck. Patty grabbed a knife, and lunged for Edvin, but Bob Newbie and Betty Simovitch tackled her into the water. The group kept fighting until the bomb started beeping. 30 seconds left. Edvin grabbed it and threw it as hard as he could. Laurel and Bob grabbed the oars and rowed for their life.
Jade Greenwood stood at the prow of the Twinbrook ship. Shark Racquet joined her, but noticed something flying towards the boat. Behind it, lay the remains of an island, that had sunk under the sea. All four Twinbrook members gathered around the object. ...1. The ship exploded. Maximus McDermott closed his eyes as the explosion consumed them.
==Trivia==
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