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Jade Greenwood stood at the prow of the Twinbrook ship. Shark Racquet joined her, but noticed something flying towards the boat. Behind it, lay the remains of an island, that had sunk under the sea. All four Twinbrook members gathered around the object. ...1. The ship exploded. Maximus McDermott closed his eyes as the explosion consumed them.
===Chapter 25: Thwarted===
Patty Abe stood, watching the explosion with horror and anger. Maximus McDermott was dead. She ran behind a rock, hiding from the flaming shrapnel. Her revenge was over. Maximus had died. She couldn't avenge her sister and Bart, it was too late. She would get her revenge instead on whichever contestant had killed Max. She would just kill them all. It was obvious that she wouldn't stop screaming at herself for running and leaving Serena behind until she had gotten her revenge.
 
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