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*Piper Sparks
*Piper Sparks


'''Chapter 21:Weapons'''
===<u>'''Chapter 21:Weapons'''</u>===


Patty Abe ran through the forest, barely seeing the brush get thicker and taller as she ran. Tears flew backwards from her face as she sprinted. Her sister had had so many wishes, dreams, hopes...She had been so hopeful when no one else was. She had had great desires for graduation, college, life with Bart, a family of her own, and that one man in the arena had never let her have the chance. Now Patty's desire was for revenge.
Patty Abe ran through the forest, barely seeing the brush get thicker and taller as she ran. Tears flew backwards from her face as she sprinted. Her sister had had so many wishes, dreams, hopes...She had been so hopeful when no one else was. She had had great desires for graduation, college, life with Bart, a family of her own, and that one man in the arena had never let her have the chance. Now Patty's desire was for revenge.


">Max was completely and utterly satisfied. All the supplies from both slaughtered camps were his own, the people back home knew he wasn't one to mess with, and Bart and his precious little Serena were both out of the picture and onto the spit. One didn't refuse meat in the arena. That other girl had probably seen enough of his power to stay away forever. Bart had mentioned her briefly as Patty. She seemed a bit old for the arena, but whatever. She was no threat.
Max was completely and utterly satisfied. All the supplies from both slaughtered camps were his own, the people back home knew he wasn't one to mess with, and Bart and his precious little Serena were both out of the picture and onto the spit. One didn't refuse meat in the arena. That other girl had probably seen enough of his power to stay away forever. Bart had mentioned her briefly as Patty. She seemed a bit old for the arena, but whatever. She was no threat.


Patty had found a cluster of trees where a few branches overlapped enough for her to camp there temporarily. She sat on the triangular seat the branches made and sobbed for her best friend and her sister. Whoever that murderer was on the beach, he would die. How easy to make it was another decision. Suddenly, her movements stilled. She held her breath without thinking about it, surprised at her instincts. A muscular, orange-haired man was moving through the jungle below her. She almost leapt right out of the tree to bring him down, but she didn't. She knew that this required more finesse. She wanted to kill him in the best way, in a way to let the families at home know that any evilness, in Max or Alexander, couldn't go unpunished. So she had to get there slowly. There's a way to outwit everyone.
Patty had found a cluster of trees where a few branches overlapped enough for her to camp there temporarily. She sat on the triangular seat the branches made and sobbed for her best friend and her sister. Whoever that murderer was on the beach, he would die. How easy to make it was another decision. Suddenly, her movements stilled. She held her breath without thinking about it, surprised at her instincts. A muscular, orange-haired man was moving through the jungle below her. She almost leapt right out of the tree to bring him down, but she didn't. She knew that this required more finesse. She wanted to kill him in the best way, in a way to let the families at home know that any evilness, in Max or Alexander, couldn't go unpunished. So she had to get there slowly. There's a way to outwit everyone.