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It was getting dark and the Hidden Springs kids hadn't returned. Annie was getting worried. She heard voices and was terrified. She crept back into the remainder of the shipwreck when something snapped and she fell into the ocean. Luckily, no one heard her. She quickly swam back up, forcing herself not to scream. Then, she spotted something in the water; a kitchen knife. Without thinking, she grabbed it and shoved it into her pocket. Annie knew that if she was going to survive she would need food. She climbed out of the wreck and headed into the jungle.
Jonah decided he would go out to look for food while Patty and Serena hid up a tree. Jonah headed into the jungle, not knowing he was being followed. He tripped, and fell down a small hill, into a stream. Getting up, he noticed a large barrel. He smashed a hole in the top and found it was full of fresh fruit! As he was about to roll it back, a knife was plunged through his back, killing him instantly. As the body fell, a terrified Annie Tong stood holding a kitchen knife,
When she got back, she knew she was in danger. The Luna Lakes ship had arrived.
Laurel sprinted into the Jungle, looking everywhere for food. She knew she had to find some, everyone was getting hungry. Suddenly she spotted a container and a bottle of milk hanging from a tree branch. Instantly, she was up the tree and untying the items. On her way back to Bob and Betty, she tripped on something and spilt the milk into a stream. When she looked, she realised it was a body. The body of Jonah Lai. Horrified that the body was just left there, she began checking it for items. Soon after, she noticed a small dagger in his shoe, and grabbed it. Knowing she had an advantage over Bob and Betty, she headed back to them.
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Spellcaster a couple of things, Moonlight Falls ship comes last, its in order of the towns. Also you know in the Hunger games, theres Foxface and Annie was going to be foxface but otherwise brilliant chapter, I like how she killed Jonai by mistake. Keep up with the good work <font size="3"><span style="font-family:impact">[[User:Blue12porcupine|<span style="color:teal; border:3px double teal; background-color:orange">Blue12porcupine</span>]] [[User talk:Blue12porcupine|<span style="color:orange; border:3px double orange; background-color:teal">talk</span>]]</span></font> 08:10, June 23, 2013 (UTC)
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