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==Unpublished Chapters==
==='''<u><span style="font-size:18px;">Chapter 13</span></u>'''===
Alexender JrII starred at the Goth gamesGames on his TV screen,. heHe had being watching non-stop for the past few days. The tvTV was massive and covered quite a lot inof Alexander II's private living room. Pearl sat next to him, her face was pale. She had watched her boyfriend being murdered in cold blood on the tvTV. She thought the Goth gamesGames was sick and horrible; it iswas much worse. It unleashes the monster inside people, the one locked up inside for a good reason. Her brother had unleashed the monster and she could tell Maximus was pure crazy. If only her brother looklooked at himself and noticed that killing is wrong. WhatsWhat's the point of winning the Goth games,Games? itIt is a sentence of death entering the arena. If you win the games you are paraded around all of Simvalley. People smile and wave but inside they want to kill you for the killing their children. After the parading most go mad, one winner got killed by another member in her own town. Pearl just hoped her brother would die with respect and be honoured after the Goth Games.
 
"Pearl?" said a quite voice
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"Yes?"
 
"Come here". Pearl looked terrified; what could this manicmaniac son want with her. He pressed a secret switch and a hologram appeared of them. Alexander II then pulled her and pushed a bookshelf so that it flipped. It rotated until it revealed a hidden room, Alexander II walked in. Pearl followed in amazement and sacredness. The room had mismatch wooden walls and cobwebs everywhere. The floor was wooden planks and candles lit the room. There was many bookshelf's and tables. In one corner was a mini lounge with a TV. Everything looked makeshift but still incredible. "WwhatWhat is this place?" stuttered pearlPearl.
 
"This is my secret hideout,. beforeBefore father moved here it was an old ancient palace built for the King in mediaevalmedieval times. But when simvalleySimvalley became a democracy it was lost and forgotten. Many medieval palaces have secret rooms and entranceentrances and I was lucky to find one. Father cannot see or hear us, which is good. I do not want to get on his bad side as he had before me, 15 other cloned sons which went wrong and thus he destroyed. I have redone this place, to my own liking. I wanted a nanny because I wanted someone to share this place with. I couldn't show you in the first place because I needed to make a hologram of you first and get your voice correct. Right now, Father can see and hear the hologram watching the Goth Games. So what do you want to do?"
 
Alexander I laughed happily in his study. Two of the people in the Goth gamesGames had gone crazy which meant huge blood bathes and excitement. He glanced at the TV checking to see what son was doing. Good, he was watching the Goth gamesGames with Pearl. He checked to see what every town was doing. All was quiet; in each town everyone was working or going to school. Everything was going well, too well. "There must be a plot to other throw me in the making" thought Alexander I, "I must kill some people cruelly". He laughed as he teleported a few of his citizens into his room, "now how shall I torture them?" He laughed cruelly and the citizens were never seen again...
 
Alexander laughed happily in his study. Two of the people in the Goth games had gone crazy which meant huge blood bathes and excitement. He glanced at the TV checking to see what son was doing. Good, he was watching the Goth games with Pearl. He checked to see what every town was doing. All was quiet each town everyone was working or going to school. Everything was going well, too well. "There must be a plot to other throw me in the making" thought Alexander, "I must kill some people cruelly". He laughed as he teleported a few of his citizens into his room, "now how shall I torture them?" He laughed cruelly and the citizens were never seen again...
===<u>'''Chapter 14'''</u>===
<p style="margin-bottom:0cm">Carly Benton and Jareth Alto headed into the jungle to find food. Jax Benton and Christa Landgraab started to look for shelter. Christa found a cave, and started to collect leaves for bedding. She told Jax to watch over the cave. Unbeknownst to the pair, a pair of eyes was watching them. Carly heard the sound of running water, and sprinted to it. Jareth ran after her, but tripped and fell. He crashed through a wooden floor and found himself inside an old underground hut. In his excitement, he got up, then screamed. He had broken his ankle. Jareth crawled to what looked like a table. On it, he found an empty bottle and a steel bow with seven arrows. Delighted that he had found a weapon, he crawled back to the opening. Realising he couldn’t get out, he screamed for Carly.</p>