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==Notes:==
- The entire family is in the Family Bin, available
- Irene and Spencer are actually meant to be twins, but I
==Charaters==
Irene Funke
Carol Funke
Spencer Funke
Sabrina Funke and Rhett Funke
The Goth family
Claire Ursine (and her son)
==Prologue==
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<p style="text-indent: 0.5in">My family moved to Sunset Valley in its heyday, when the only major nuisance was the occasional burglar, or maybe some ghosts. Otherwise, children played in the park after school, teens hung out at the beach, and everyone was living the suburban dream. We were all bunched into the car; me, my brother Spencer, my toddler sister Carol, and my mom and dad, Sabrina and Rhett. We had just moved from Riverview, because a house fire burned down our old home. My dad wanted a fresh start.</p>
<p style="text-indent: 0.5in">We pulled up to the small, cozy, 1-story house. It was built
<p style="text-indent: 0.5in">“Well, the soil will be ok, I guess.” She said, feeling the soil. Carol gurgled and slapped the dirt. I watched them for a moment, and then looked at the house.</p>
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<p style="text-indent: 0.5in">I could have sworn I saw a face looking through the living room window.</p>
<p style="text-indent: 0.5in">I ran inside, and into the living room, but the only thing I saw was some furniture, an old T.V., and an ancient-looking teddy bear.</p>
<p style="text-indent: 0.5in">My brother walked in
<p style="text-indent: 0.5in">“I’M GONNA TELL MOM!” I shouted, running outside. The face
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<p style="text-indent: 0.5in">After living in Sunset Valley for a few weeks, we were quite settled in. This little girl named Bella Bachelor and I became best friends, and my mom and dad were doing great in their new careers. We were all settled and happy.</p>
<p style="text-indent: 0.5in">It was a beautiful Saturday afternoon, and it was both Carol and Spencer’s birthdays, a fact which Spencer hated,
<p style="text-indent: 0.5in">We were all standing around the birthday cake
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<p style="text-indent: 0.5in">In the corner of the room stood a little ghost girl. She was blue, her hair was in long pigtails, and her dress looked like it was from hundreds of years ago. I screamed and reeled back, bumping into the table, and knocking over the cake. The cake fell to the floor, with the candles lit. My mother screamed, “PUT OUT THE CANDLES, RHETT!”
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<p style="text-indent: 0.5in">“You stupid little klutz! You ruined my cake! You’re just jealous I’m going to be older than you!” he shouted at me
<p style="text-indent: 0.5in">“But, I saw a girl! A ghost girl! Over there!” I said, pointing to the corner of the room where I saw the ghost, but there was nothing there.</p>
<p style="text-indent: 0.5in">“You just want all the attention on my birthday! You ruined my cake! And you’re crazy! Ghosts are only at the graveyard! You’re stupid and crazy!” He kept yelling at me, until my mom came over and told him to stop.</p>
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<p style="text-indent: 0.5in">“Good, I guess Irene didn’t mess everything up!” Spencer said, stomping to the kitchen. My mom came up and hugged me.</p>
<p style="text-indent: 0.5in">“Sweetheart, do try to be more careful
<p style="text-indent: 0.5in">Everyone forgot
<p style="text-indent: 0.5in">But, for the rest of the time I lived in that house, I never went near that corner.</p>
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<p style="text-indent: 0.5in">One night, as I was finishing my homework, I looked over to Carol. She was sitting in the corner, facing the wall, and whispering into the air. I slowly walked towards her, hardly breathing, to hear what she was saying.</p>
<p style="text-indent: 0.5in">“…You don’t have to follow him!” Carol said with desperation evident in her voice. “He’s my brother, you don’t have to kill him! Kill someone else!” She said. A chill went up my spine. Carol gasped. “Behind me?” she said, and quickly turned around, eyes glaring.
<p style="text-indent: 0.5in">“Uh, who were you talking to?” I asked, afraid.</p>
<p style="text-indent: 0.5in">“Uh, Nobody! Duh! What are you even talking about, you creeper. I was doing my homework, before you interrupted me!” Carol said, holding up a work sheet that
<p style="text-indent: 0.5in">Her normally dark blue eyes were now a dark, malevolent black. “Leave me alone,
<p style="text-indent: 0.5in">I gasped, taking a step back. I tripped over one of Carol’s toys, and I fell backwards, and I screamed as my head struck the edge of the coffee table. As my vision faded, I saw my mother and father run over to me, and Carol’s bedroom door opening slowly.</p>
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<p style="text-indent: 0.5in">I woke up to bright, industrial, sterile white light boring through my eyelids. There was an incessant beeping noise close by. I opened my eyes, squinting into the bright light. I looked around me. I was in a hospital room.
<p style="border-bottom: medium none; border-left: medium none; padding-bottom: 0in; text-indent: 0.5in; padding-left: 0in; padding-right: 0in; border-top: medium none; border-right: medium none; padding-top: 0in; mso-border-bottom-alt: wave windowtext 3.0pt; mso-padding-alt: 0in 0in 1.0pt 0in">“Sweetheart, it’s not you. You're fine. You'll be OK. Spencer…” Dad stopped and took a deep, shuddering breath. “He’s… He’s dead sweetheart.”</p>
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<p style="text-indent: 0.5in">Car accident. That’s what killed my teenage brother. He and his friends were drag racing around the back roads of Sunset Valley, swerving into people’s yards and hitting mailboxes, when they lost control. They swerved into the Goth Manor, and crashed
<p style="text-indent: 0.5in">Spencer was the driver.</p>
<p style="text-indent: 0.5in">For two weeks, I refused to eat. I refused to sleep. I was failing in school. I couldn’t stop the constant flow of tears. I didn’t speak to anyone, and preferred to spend every moment curled up underneath my brother’s bed, going through
<p style="text-indent: 0.5in">At the funeral, I broke my silence. As they lowered the casket into the ground at Pleasant Rest Graveyard, I panicked.</p>
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<p style="text-indent: 0.5in">“''Spencer! Come back''!” I screamed, as my dad pulled me away from his gravestone. “''Come back, so I can save you''!” I sobbed, and my dad picked me up.</p>
<p style="text-indent: 0.5in">After his death, none of us ever
<p style="text-indent: 0.5in">I came to hate Carol.</p>
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<p style="text-indent: 0.5in">Years passed. My parents began to show their advanced age. I was close to graduating High School, with honors. Carol was only a freshman, and she was failing. My father still worked at the Landgraab Science Facility, and my mom stayed at home.
<p style="text-indent: 0.5in">Next, when I was a sophomore, the boiler in the school exploded which killed sixteen people, ten of whom were teens. I knew my sister was the last one who was
<p style="text-indent: 0.5in">Later, The Goth Manor, after being renovated
<p style="text-indent: 0.5in">Sunset Valley became known as “cursed” over
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 10pt; text-indent: 0.5in;">The Visitor was a little girl named Victoria. She had lived in a city called London, hundreds of years ago, with her wealthy parents. She
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 10pt; text-indent: 0.5in;">About a year later, Victoria’s mother found out that she was pregnant, and later gave birth to triplets
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 10pt; text-indent: 0.5in;">When Emily and her brothers became children, Victoria cast Emily’s soul from her body and took it over. She then excitedly told her parents that she, Victoria, was alive again! Her parents were horrified. They begged her to leave Emily’s body, to bring Emily back, but Emily was gone. In a fit of anger and jealousy,
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 10pt; text-indent: 0.5in;">As it turns out, the little dead girl is my great aunt. And I am her tool. She is determined to end our family this time around.</p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 10pt; text-indent: 0.5in;">And there's very little I can do to stop her. When she takes over, all I can do is look out from eyes that are no longer mine, as hands I no longer control to cause suffering on unsuspecting Sims.</p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 10pt;">I was more than
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 10pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>I was restocking the shelves when I heard the door slam open, along with heavy panting. I stood up quickly,
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 10pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>"Ah, Watcher." I grumbled, as I tried my best to clear the isle, before I heard the scream.</p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 10pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>"Irene! Please, help me!" I looked up, and saw Carol, dripping wet
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 10pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>"What in the Netherworld are you doing here?" I asked her, with barely contained anger in my voice. "You ruin my life for years and expect me to HELP you?" I take a deep breath when I
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 10pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>"Irene, take the day off. I can see you have something you need to resolve." he said, nodding to my sister. I nodded my head and
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 10pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>When we
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 10pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>"Ok, what did you do?" I asked, afraid of what I would hear. She looked up at me, her dark-rimmed eyes wide and young looking.</p>
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<h2 class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 10pt;">Chapter 7</h2>
As I sped down the road to my mother's house, I glanced at Carol. She seemed
'' Maybe I should take her somewhere...
When we reached my mom's house,
In what remained of the kitchen, an ornate urn sat, surrounded by ash. I walked to it and picked it up, planning to put it in the graveyard. I held in my tears and turned around, fury
"You monster. You horrid little beast!" I yelled, knocking her to the ground. She gasped.
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Then she laughed.
"Monster, eh? Not the first time I'
"Our family? Carol, please, snap out of it!" I said, trying to buy myself some time to run.
"Carol? Oh, yes. You mean this girl." said the demon, gesturing to Carol's body. "No. This is not me. I am Victoria. And you are the last of your
She came closer and closer, her grotesque smile getting bigger and bigger, and I fell backwards, hitting my head on what remained of the kitchen counter, knocking myself out.
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A minute or so afterwards, I came to in an empty kitchen.
It was locked. Behind me, a laugh echoed.
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"Nice try ''sister'', but you're not getting out of here..." Victoria said in Carol's voice.
I gasped and turned around. Victoria stood there with her smugly, dark eyes glowing malevolently.
"You evil little..." I said, and lunged at her. She screamed as she fell.
"Irene!" Carol gasped, and I looked at her. Her eyes were pure blue and scared. "I can do something! I know what to-" she screamed and I jumped back, afraid.
"You stupid little rat!
Then Carol replied, pained, "I know how to stop you- forever!"
Carol lurched down the stairs, as Victoria attempted to regain
I saw her head to the pool. "Carol! Watch out!" I cried. She turned around to look at me, her blue eyes watering.
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One of her eyes was clear, sky blue, and the other was blacker than midnight.
"Carol... I love you too..." I sobbed.
==Chapter 9- Epilogue==
Carol's funeral took place on a sunny winter day, cold and bright. I walked across the
Victoria was laid to rest.
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