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	This might seem like a minor thing, but ~~it's~~ the hair shampoo example really necessary? To me it just comes across as nutty and showing up out of nowhere (not to speak of its veracity, which I, for one, question). In short, I don't think it's the best example. In my opinion, a comparision to smoking would be a better one. The already present "incubating a virus" analogy is also good. [[User:Laurabcn\|Laurabcn]] ([[User talk:Laurabcn\|talk]]) 09:09, October 5, 2014 (UTC)		This might seem like a minor thing, but is the hair shampoo example really necessary? To me it just comes across as nutty and showing up out of nowhere (not to speak of its veracity, which I, for one, question). In short, I don't think it's the best example. In my opinion, a comparision to smoking would be a better one. The already present "incubating a virus" analogy is also good. [[User:Laurabcn\|Laurabcn]] ([[User talk:Laurabcn\|talk]]) 09:09, October 5, 2014 (UTC)

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