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:::Like Starmoonie said, a Beta version of [[Bella Goth]], [[Mortimer Goth]], and [[Vita Alto]]. Also there´s [[Liam O'Dourke]], but he's from [[Hidden Springs]], [[Kim Kent]] and [[Piper Hipp]] from the Exchange (another Liam is on the Exchange with Kim and Piper). I don't recognize anyone else. Bye! <span style="font-size:smaller">[[Usuario:Bad Lisa|<span title="Who am I?" style="background-color:#adff2f; color:#FFFFFF; border: 1px solid #7fff00"> Bad Lisa </span>]] [[File:Sims3plumbob.png|10px]] [[User Talk:Bad Lisa|<span title="Messages" style="background-color:#adff2f; color:#FFFFFF; border: 1px solid #7fff00"> Talk Page </span>]] [http://es.simpsons.wikia.com/wiki/Usuario:Bad_Lisa <span title="My Wikisimpsons page, in Spanish" style="background-color:#adff2f; color:#FFFFFF; border: 1px solid #7fff00"> Simpsons Wiki </span>]</span> 15:07, July 24, 2012 (UTC)
::::Also see [[list of Sims used in promotional materials]]. [[User:Nikel23|'''<span style="color:#007FFF; text-shadow: #ACE5EE 0 4px 4px;">Nikel</span>''']] [[User talk:Nikel23|<span style="color: #30D5C8 ; text-shadow: #00FFEF 0 4px 4px;"><sub>''Talk''</sub></span>]] <sub>–</sub> [[The Sims Wiki:Featured Media/Voting|<span style="color:red ; text-shadow:#E97451 0 4px 4px;"><sub>''Vote''</sub></span>]] <sub>–</sub> [[User blog:Nikel23/Guess the Place|<span style="color:grey ; text-shadow:silver 0 4px 4px;"><sub>''Guess!''</sub></span>]] 13:07, July 27, 2012 (UTC)
== Tense Issues in article ==
I noticed there are issues with tense jumping in the writing of this article. It regularly jumps in time period and tense. I think it might be best to set this to be written in past tense or past perfect tense when talking about development, production, and promotion of the game, and present tense or present perfect tense when talking about gameplay. (Present Perfect would be greatly prefered from gameplay, but I know that is a bit difficult for some people to intentionally write in present perfect tense and it can cause things to get quite wordy. Most people don't even know the difference between Present Tense and Present Perfect Tense, so I doubt there is too much of an issue.) Wikipedia's editing guide has a nice article on the use of proper tense in encyclopedic articles. It has some good examples. Although we don't have to maintain nearly as strict a standard here on such informal articles, good grammar would make the site easier to read, and look nicer. [[User:Ruedii|Ruedii]] ([[User talk:Ruedii|talk]]) 08:12, July 28, 2012 (UTC)
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