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{{Fan fiction
|image =[[File:E1Pilot.png|250px]]
|name = '''Pilot'''
|genre = Adventure, Drama, Romantic
|creator = [[User:Kit0804|'''Kit0804''']]
|rating =
|originalrun = 2nd July 2016
|status = Finished
|proceeded=[[Fanon:Episode 2: Money in the Bank|Money in the Bank]]
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<p class="ve-ce-paragraphNode ve-ce-generated-wrapper ve-ce-branchNode" style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;">It's a sign that we shouldn't have left. We should turn back now...</p>
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! class="ve-ce-branchNode ve-ce-tableCellNode ve-ce-tableCellNode-header" colspan="1" rowspan="1" style="min-width:1em;"|Diane Lark<p class="ve-ce-paragraphNode ve-ce-generated-wrapper ve-ce-branchNode" style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;">
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| class="ve-ce-branchNode ve-ce-tableCellNode ve-ce-tableCellNode-data" colspan="1" rowspan="1" style="min-width:1em;"|Hold it. No chance hun. Nu-uh. No. We left for a reason, now, we should be able to fix this. <p class="ve-ce-paragraphNode ve-ce-generated-wrapper ve-ce-branchNode" style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;">
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<p class="ve-ce-paragraphNode ve-ce-generated-wrapper ve-ce-branchNode" style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;">Shiva Bhatt</p>
| class="ve-ce-branchNode ve-ce-tableCellNode ve-ce-tableCellNode-data" colspan="1" rowspan="1" style="min-width:1em;"|Well I don't know about you but I don't have much experience in doing any of this.<p class="ve-ce-paragraphNode ve-ce-generated-wrapper ve-ce-branchNode" style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;">
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<p class="ve-ce-paragraphNode ve-ce-branchNode" style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;">Fine, we'll call a mechanic to pick us up...I just hope you've got deep pockets.</p>
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! class="ve-ce-branchNode ve-ce-tableCellNode ve-ce-tableCellNode-header" colspan="1" rowspan="1" style="min-width:1em;"|Diane Lark<p class="ve-ce-paragraphNode ve-ce-generated-wrapper ve-ce-branchNode" style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;">
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<p class="ve-ce-paragraphNode ve-ce-generated-wrapper ve-ce-branchNode" style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;">''The camera pans outwards, we see Shiva heading over to the bonnett to pop the hood and Diane laying down on the grass.''</p>
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| class="ve-ce-branchNode ve-ce-tableCellNode ve-ce-tableCellNode-data" colspan="1" rowspan="1" style="min-width:1em;"|'''Flashback, circa 1998''. '''''
An 18 year old Diane Lark unpacks her things from her mother's car.
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<p class="ve-ce-paragraphNode ve-ce-generated-wrapper ve-ce-branchNode" style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;">Manny Lark</p>
| class="ve-ce-branchNode ve-ce-tableCellNode ve-ce-tableCellNode-data" colspan="1" rowspan="1" style="min-width:1em;"|''(checks watch) ''Hey, yeah we could! We made pretty good time up here! Let's go check this room out!
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<p class="ve-ce-paragraphNode ve-ce-generated-wrapper ve-ce-branchNode" style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;">''A big blue car turns up, an 18 year old Shiva Bhatt gets out the car with tears streaming down her face. Diane takes immediate interest in her.''</p>
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<p class="ve-ce-paragraphNode ve-ce-generated-wrapper ve-ce-branchNode" style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;">''Diane pushes Manny and Darla into the car, confused, they drive away after hugging.''</p>
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<p class="ve-ce-paragraphNode ve-ce-generated-wrapper ve-ce-branchNode" style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;">''Diane makes her way over to Shiva.''</p>
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<p class="ve-ce-paragraphNode ve-ce-generated-wrapper ve-ce-branchNode" style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;">My little girl...she's all grown up...</p>
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! class="ve-ce-branchNode ve-ce-tableCellNode ve-ce-tableCellNode-header" colspan="1" rowspan="1" style="min-width:1em;"|Rajesh Bhatt<p class="ve-ce-paragraphNode ve-ce-generated-wrapper ve-ce-branchNode" style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;">
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<p class="ve-ce-paragraphNode ve-ce-generated-wrapper ve-ce-branchNode" style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;">'''Present day''' ''Scene change to the broken down car, Diane is still asleep, and Shiva is covered in oil.''</p>
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<p class="ve-ce-paragraphNode ve-ce-generated-wrapper ve-ce-branchNode" style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;">''Diane is still asleep with a manual on her face''</p>
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| class="ve-ce-branchNode ve-ce-tableCellNode ve-ce-tableCellNode-data" colspan="1" rowspan="1" style="min-width:1em;"|I'll cook you if you don't get up! C'mon! Help me, alright?<p class="ve-ce-paragraphNode ve-ce-generated-wrapper ve-ce-branchNode" style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;">
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<p class="ve-ce-paragraphNode ve-ce-generated-wrapper ve-ce-branchNode" style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;">''(Diane goes to the cab and turns the key, the engine starts immeidatley, the two cheer, and drive on)''</p>
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<p class="ve-ce-paragraphNode ve-ce-generated-wrapper ve-ce-branchNode" style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;">'''Flashback, December 31, 1999 '''''Diane and Shiva are at a millenium party, the atmosphere is bad and everyone feels awkward.''</p>
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<p class="ve-ce-paragraphNode ve-ce-generated-wrapper ve-ce-branchNode" style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;">''Shiva notices Diane is sobbing''</p>
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<p class="ve-ce-paragraphNode ve-ce-generated-wrapper ve-ce-branchNode" style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;">''(Diane and Shiva stare at eachother as everyone around them cheers, they kiss, and smile at eachother)''</p>
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<p class="ve-ce-paragraphNode ve-ce-generated-wrapper ve-ce-branchNode" style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;">'''Present day '''''scene change to Diane and Shiva's new cabin on a cliff.''</p>
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<p class="ve-ce-paragraphNode ve-ce-generated-wrapper ve-ce-branchNode" style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;">''(Diane and Shiva laugh)''</p>
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<p class="ve-ce-paragraphNode ve-ce-generated-wrapper ve-ce-branchNode" style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;">''Diane and Shiva walk out of the house over to a small 1960's style house, where an elderly woman is gardening outside.''</p>
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| class="ve-ce-branchNode ve-ce-tableCellNode ve-ce-tableCellNode-data" colspan="1" rowspan="1" style="min-width:1em;"|It's nice to meet you! I'm Shiva, Shiva Bhatt. And this is my girlfriend,
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