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Richie was stressing out- Amy was here and he could tell Angela hated her! The last thing he needed was a fight between the girls! Before he realised what was going on, Angela dragged him by his collar into the kitchen. "Richie," she started "how on earth do you know her?"
 
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As the two took their positions, Richie did the usual "I'm self-taught so I'm not that good" trash, which Lilith disagreed with. They took everyone by surprise.
 
Dustin was told to keep an eye on Tommy, his little two -year -old brother. Dustin could tell he was hungry. After Richie and Marty finished their little show, Tommy decided to attack. He crawled across the sofa that had been moved to the dining room and sunk his teeth into his unsuspecting brother.
 
"Tommy! No! Stop biting me!" Dusin yelled. Richie turned and what he saw nearly made him fall over with laughter- Tommy had sunk his teeth into Dustin and refused to let go! Eventually Angela came over to help. The sight of her made Tommy stop. When Dustin had recovered, he picked Tommy up and handed him to Angela, simply saying "He's yours now." before examing the damage.
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Mona smiled. "I didn't mean that! I meant, why are you still in here?"
 
Dustin looked up. He really didn't want to tell Mona what had happened. He decided to. No lies. "I thinkWell, Amy's was trying to make aconversation move onwith me, and the topic came to my family. I rejectedsaid hersomething quite harsh, and now I'm fearregretting thatit. sheI willtried maketo funapoligise, ofbut myshe familywouldn't listen."
 
Mona. looked furioussypathetic. "How dare she! I'll showtalk to her. howSee badher itside isof tothe messstory, withOK?" Dustin gave her a Hillson!"weak smile. That's all he could've asked for.
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