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===Supporting Characters===
*[[Fanon:JoanaJoanna Delgado|JoanaJoanna Delgado]]
*[[Fanon:Leona Redfield|Leona Delgado]]
*[[Fanon:Enrico Delgado|Enrico Delgado]]
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[[File:Teenage_Joana.jpg|thumb|left|200px|Joana Delgado]]
Joana then took a seat next to Christine. "I'm sorry" JoanaJoanna said, "Mom asked me to clean my room, so...". "Well no wonder" Christine said, "Aunt Leona is a Neat person after all", JoanaJoanna only nodded.
 
Christine Sirenia Redfield was the only daughter of Christoper James Redfield and Tamera Gerardo-Redfield. She inherited both her parents' traits, the good and caring traits from her mother and the charm from her father.
 
JoanaJoanna Delgado was the second child and daughter of Enrico Delgado and Leona Redfield-Delgado. She was a year younger than Christine. However, unlike Christine and her brother, Nathaniel Delgado, who inherited some of their parents' traits, JonaJoanna inherited none. However, JoanaJoanna had almost identical face with her mother and aunt, Dr. Jennifer Redfield-Curtiz.
 
"It's almost been four years isn't it" Christine said.
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[[File:Grandchildren_of_John.jpg|thumb|left|200px|John's grandchildren]]''Four years ago, Pleasant-Rest Graveyard''
 
"But brother, this is not fair, grandpa promised to take us on vacation once he recovered!" said a 11 years old JoanaJoanna to her brother Nathaniel. Nathaniel then hugged JoanaJoanna tightly, trying to comfort her. Meanwhile, a 12 years old Christine didn't said anything, she only watched her grandmother, Lily Redfield, was crying. John's another grandson, Daniel Curtiz was also quiet, didn't said anything.
 
"Oh John *''sob''*" Lily said in tears. Lily's twin daughters, Leona and Jean tried to console her. At the other hand, the Redfields' adopted child, Charlie just arrived. Everyone greeted him. "Oh gosh Charlie *''sob''*" Lily said hugging Charlie, "John, he... he...".
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Back to present day.
 
"So many memories about grandpa John" Christine said. She took another photo from her pocket, this time time a photo of her hugging John. "I really miss him" Christine said. "Me too Christine" JoanaJoanna said, "Me too".
 
The two teenage girls then became quiet for a moment. "So.. uh... Where will we go now?" JoanaJoanna said wiping her tears. "Oh, well, I almost forgot" Christine said "How about the bookstore, the newest issue of fashion magazine is already available there".
 
"Oh, sure" JoanaJoanna said. "And after that, let's visit grandma Lily" Christine said. "Yeah, I agree" JoanaJoanna said smiling.
 
==Chapter 2: Four Years Later==
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Bryan then stood and approached them. "Hi, my name is Bryan Schmidt" he introduced himself "I... uh... I'm new in this town". "Oh I see" Nathaniel said shaking Bryan's hand. "Name's Nathaniel Delgado, but you can call me Nate, nice to meet you Mr. Schmidt". "Oh, just call me Bryan, because we appear to be in same age after all" Bryan said.
 
"Well, okay, Nathaniel, what bring you here? Do you need something?" Lily asked. "I'm here to take JoanaJoanna's cellphone, Apparently she left it here" Nathaniel said. "Oh yeah, so that's JoanaJoanna's phone" Lily said "Geez she's so careless. Wait here, I will bring it".
 
Lily then went to her room, leaving Bryan and Nathaniel in the living room.
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"By the way, are you an athlete too?" Bryan asked again. "Yeah, but I'm still in the amateur league" Nathaniel said "Still need years until I promoted to the pro". "Uh-huh" Bryan only nodded.
 
A minutes later, Lily returned with JoanaJoanna's cellphone. "Here your sister's cellphone, tell her to not being careless again" Lily said giving the cellphone to Nathaniel. "By the way, why didn't she just come here by herself?" Lily asked.
 
"She's on a date with her new boyfriend right now and she borrowed my cellphone" Nathaniel said. "Oh dear, why can't she become more like your mother or your father?" Lily said. "Well, her face is almost identical with mom and aunt Jean, so..." Nathaniel said. "That doesn't counted young man" Lily said, slightly upset.
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"Well it's okay honey" Tamera said "Your father and I don't like him either".
 
"..." Christine didn't said anything. "Anyway, have you call JoanaJoanna yet?" Tamera asked again. "Oh, not yet" Christine said, "Well, I miss her too, I wonder what's she doing right now...".
 
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[[File:Joana_argue_with_Leona.jpg|thumb|200px|Joana argue with Leona]]''The Delgado House''
 
"Great woolly Llamas, JoanaJoanna!" Leona said in anger "Why are you dressing like this!?".
 
"Huh? Why? I love this outfit!" JoanaJoanna said.
 
Leona was very upset seeing how her daughter, JoanaJoanna Delgado, dressed herself. The young woman wore a red cropped top covered in dark blue sleeveless leather jacket, dark grey short jean, and stockings, completed with punk-like make up.
 
"For God sake Joana look at you! Do you ever realize how old you are now!?" Leona said, "You are almost 20 and still dressing like a street-punk-teenager!".
 
"Okay mom that's enough! I wear whatever I like!" JoanaJoanna yelled at Leona before leaving her room.
 
"Hey Joana! Come back here you young lady!" Leona said.
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However, Joana didn't listen to her mother. She walked outside the house and went somewhere. From his room upstairs, Nathaniel watched. He only sighed.
 
"Ugh, what is so wrong with this outfit? This is my favorite style since I was 12!" JoanaJoanna said, grumbling. "I guess mom's really ''old-fashioned''".
 
Suddenly, JoanaJoanna cellphone's was ringing. She took her cellphone and found that she got a message from Christine.
 
"Oh nice, Christine's here! Finally I have a friend to hang out in The Flamencos tonight!" JoanaJoanna said in excitement.
 
==Chapter 6: The Package==
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"It's 09.15 A.M" Chris said looking at his watches.
 
"Oh I still have time for rest until 04.00 P.M" Christine said "JoanaJoanna asked me to hang out in The Flamencos".
 
"Sounds nice" Chris said.
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12.30 P.M
 
Christine was waking up from her nap. She was seen reading her favorite novel on her bed. Suddenly, she got a message from her cellphone. It was from JoanaJoanna. The message said:
 
:"''Hey cousin, I'm in the Dive Bar right now. Do you wanna come?''"
::''-JoanaJoanna-''
 
"Hmm, the Dive Bar" Christine thought, "Okay why not". She then replied the message, telling JoanaJoanna that she would be there.
 
Christine then get up from her bed and looked at the mirror. She still wore glasses and her hair still tied in pony-tail. "Well, time to make over myself" Christine said. Christine then put her glasses off and untied her hair.
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"Well, Christine Sirenia Redfield, you look so great" Christine said complimenting herself.
 
Christine then walked out from her room and greeted by Tamera. "Where are you going Christine?" Tamera asked. "I'm going to the Dive Bar" Christine said "JoanaJoanna is waiting". "Oh okay, take care" Tamera said.
 
Christine then walked approaching her car. Unknown to her, someone was watching from afar.
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“Yeah, during grandpa John’s funeral” Christine said. “By the way, where will you going?” Charlie asked. “Oh, I will go to the Dive Bar, Joana is waiting” Christine answered “After that we will go to the Flamencos”.
 
“Oh, I see... Speaking about JoanaJoanna, how is she?” Charlie said. “Well, you won’t believe until you meet her” Christine said. “Uh-huh” Charlie only nodded.
 
Suddenly, Tamera appeared from inside the house. She was very surprised seeing Charlie there. “Oh my gosh, Charlie” she said. “Hey Tamera, how’re you doin’?” Charlie asked. “I thought you said that you were still in Paris” Tamera said. “Well, I have returned since three days ago” Charlie said “And I’m planning to give you guys a surprise”.
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“No, It’s not” Charlie said “If that was reason she would end our relationship long before we married”. Chris and Tamera didn’t say anything.
 
“Well, actually Sandi was calling me couple of days ago” Tamera said “She was asking about you”. “Really? Are you sure?” Charlie asked. “Yeah...” Tamera said “I think you should call her”. “I don’t know” Charlie said “Is she already re-married?”.
 
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Jean was seen in the living room with her husband, Alex Curtiz. The two were relaxing after returned from their respective jobs. “Aww I’m getting to old” Alex said, feeling a pain on his back. “Careful darling, it might be osteoporosis” Jean said while drinking a cup of tea.
 
“Oh man, it’s still three years remained until my retirement” Alex said. “Well, but you enjoy yoryour work, right?” Jean said “Joining military career is always your long time dream”. “Yeah, you are right” Alex said took a seat to Jean. He then took a newspaper on the table.
 
The couple then became quiet for a moment. “Honey, we need to talk about our son” Jean said.
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The Flamencos was the most popular club in Pleasantview. It was founded by the twins, Nina and Dina Caliente. The club itself named after their late father, Flamenco. Dina and Nina were so proud about their business. Today was the club's 25th anniversary.
 
Christine and JoanaJoanna just arrived at the club. "Oh yeah, I always love being here" JoanaJoanna said "I can not wait to greet some of cute boys here". Christine looked at her surroundings, there were so many young people here. "Hey Christine, are you looking for someone?" JoanaJoanna asked. "No, nothing" Christine answered.
 
"Well, whatever, let's go the 3rd floor, the boys usually gathered there!" JoanaJoanna exclaimed, she grabbed Christine's arm and promptly walked approaching the elevator. "Hey JoanaJoanna, wait!" Christine said. However, as Christine and JoanaJoanna about to enter the elevator, two young adult women approached them.
 
[[File:Marlena_and_Malika.jpg|thumb|200px|Marlena and Malika|left]]
"Christine! JoanaJoanna!" said the dark-skinned girl with brown-curly-medium-length-hair calling for Christine and JoanaJoanna. The other girl, a light skinned women with short-blond-hair only stood looking at Christine and JoanaJoanna while enjoying her cigarette, some parts of her body were covered with tattoos.
 
"Oh gosh! Malika Williams, long time no see!" Christine said hugging the dark-skinned girl, Malika Williams, "How are you now? Gosh look at you now, you've changed!".
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"Who are you again?" Joana asked in confusion. "Seriously Joana, you don't recognize me? It's me, Malika" Malika said trying to made Joana remember.
 
"Oh, you're that Malika, right? The ''fat Malika''?" JoanaJoanna finally remembered. "Yeah yeah, I know that you don't recognize because I'm no longer fat" Malika said, lightly annoyed.
 
"If you don't recognize me I will surely punch you in the teeth, JoanaJoanna" the blond-haired girl said. "Sure, sure, who will forget about the self-proclaimed Queen in our school, Marlene Caliente" JoanaJoanna said in sarcastic tone.
 
"It's '''Marlena''', not Marlene!" the blond-haired girl said. Her name was Marlena Caliente, and she was daughter of the club's owner Dina Caliente.
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"By the way, do you wanna go to the third floor?" Malika asked. "Yeah, wanna go there together?" Christine asked. "Sure" Malika said "I heard from Marlena that Mrs. Caliente invited a jazz band to perform here, I can not wait!".
 
"Jazz? Meh, not my taste of music" JoanaJoanna said "We are here for the boys, Christine needs a new boyfriend".
 
"Ugh" Christine snorted. "You were having a boyfriend?" Marlena asked. "Yeah, but we already broke-up" Christine said "That guy was a j*rk". Marlena and Malika only nodded, "Well, some boys are j*rk actually" Marlena submitted "Well, what are we waiting for, let's go to the third floor".
 
The four girls then entered the elevator and heading to the third floor. Arriving in the third floor, they encountered numbers of good-looking guys gathered. "Oh my, look at those handsome boys" JoanaJoanna said. "Ugh, I think, I need to go to the bathroom" Christine said "You girls go ahead". "Sure, don't be so long okay?" JoanaJoanna said, but Christine didn't listen as she quickly walked to the bathroom.
 
In the bathroom, there were two girls having a serious conversation. Christine was unintentionally hearing their conversation. "Have you heard that there was a body found in the old mine?" the black haired girl said. "Yeah, I've heard it!" the other girl with red hair said "It's fourth time already a murder occurred in this town, and the victims are all young girls like us".
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Bryan was still in the Delgado house. About few hours ago, he received a message from Mikhaela who claimed that she was in his apartment again. Bryan was getting more upset when Mikhaela attempted to call him numerous time. "Oh man, she really doesn't know how to give up, does she?" Nathaniel commented. "Yeah, this girl is worse than a stalker" Bryan said.
 
A moment later, someone entered the house, it was JoanaJoanna, who just returned home. JoanaJoanna was stunned seeing Bryan in her house. "Oh my..." she said "Brother, why did you never tell me that you have a cute friend like this?". "Huh?" Bryan raised his right eyebrow. JoanaJoanna then walked approaching him.
 
[[File:Bryan_meets_Joana.jpg|thumb|200px|Joana meets Bryan]]"Hello there handsome, my name is JoanaJoanna" she said in flirty tone "What's your name?". "W-well, I'm Bryan Schmidt, nice to meet y-you" Bryan said haltingly. "Oh my, Bryan Schmidt, a beautiful name for a handsome man like you" JoanaJoanna said again, still flirting "Tell me Bryan, what kind of drink you...".
 
"JoanaJoanna? You left your cellphone in my car again" someone else entered the house, cutting JoanaJoanna's sentence, It was Christine, she brought JoanaJoanna's cellphone who left in her car. "Oh, you are..." Bryan surpised. "Oh my" Christine said after seeing Bryan.
 
"You are Christine right?" Bryan asked. "Uh-huh, and you are, if I recall, Bryan" Christine said. Both Christine and Bryan were recognizing each other. "Wait, you two are knowing each other?" Joana asked in confusion. "Yeah, I met him when I was on my way to get you" Christine said.
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"My boss said there was a body found in the Crystal Spring, I need to go there to take some pictures for the Newspaper" Bryan said.
 
"My gosh, a body again? It's the fifth already" JoanaJoanna said.
 
"What do you mean with '''the fifth'''?" Bryan asked.
 
"Oh, you don't know yet?" Nathaniel said "Since few months ago, there were murders occurred in this town. All of the victims were young women, strangled to death with a rope or something like that". "And I thought this town was peaceful" Bryan commented. "It used to be peaceful darling" JoanaJoanna said.
 
"''The Pleasantview murderer''" Christine thought "''Oh gosh, how could something terrible like this happened in this town?''".
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Bryan was in a cab on his way back to his apartment, just returning from Crystal Springs. “''Gosh, a serial killer is on the loose in this town''” Bryan thought. As we know that Bryan was asked by his boss to took several photos of the body found in the Crystal Spring. It wasn’t easy for Bryan as several cops tried to prevent him to enter the crime scene until Bryan managed to convince them that he was with the press by calling his boss.
 
At the crime scene, Bryan met Lieutenant Enrico Delgado. Of course Bryan known that Lieutenant Delgado was the father of Nathaniel and JoanaJoanna, even though it was the first time he saw him in person. After taking several pictures, Bryan was interviewing Enrico a little. He learned that the police was troubled in finding the killer’s true identity.
 
At that time, Bryan suddenly felt interested with this case. Bryan asked Enrico if he could help, but his offer was declined since it was job for the police.
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“Dear, please, you still need rest, don’t push yourself” Leona said, hugging her husband.
 
Enrico didn’t said anything, he’s only smiled at Leona. “Is JoanaJoanna already home?” he asked. “Yeah, she’s in her room right now” Leona said. “Maybe I should ask Nathaniel to watch her whenever she go out” Enrico said.
 
“Well, perhaps” Leona said “But right now, since Christine is home...”. “Oh, Christine is home already?” Enrico asked. “Yeah, she was also here for a while” Leona claimed “She’s on her summer break”. “Well, that’s good” Enrico said, “I think I’ve to visit her and tell her about what happen in this town when she was away, for precaution”. Leona nodded in agreement.
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“Well, we are here to tell you about something” Enrico said “This is about your safety”. Christine then raised her left eyebrows, “Oh, okay, I will listen” she said. Enrico then started to tell everything about the Pleasantview Killer to Christine, especially the part about the victims were all women around her age. Christine listened to her uncle solemnly until he finished.
 
“Yeah, I already heard about that” Christine said “I never expected there is a pyschopsycho hiding somewhere in this town”. “Yeah, glad if you already knew about that” Enrico said, “You should be careful, especially when you go out during the night, make sure you bring friends with you”.
 
“I understood” Christine said.
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After had a little chat, Enrico and Leona decided to return home. “Take a shower Christine, you are smelly” Tamera jokingly said. “Urgh”“Ugh” Christine snorted. Christine then entered the bathroom and took a shower. After done, she promptly went to her room and dressing up.
 
She then thinking for a while. She took her cellphone and started searching for someone in her contact list. She stopped at Nathaniel’s name.
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“Huh? Are you serious?” Bryan raised his left eyebrow, but Christine only nodded. Bryan then looked at Christine’s eyes, he could tell that Christine was being serious. “Okay, get in, let’s talk inside” Bryan said.
 
Bryan brought Christine in to his room. “Whoa, this room is really nice decorated!” Christine said in awe. “Do you wanna drink?” Bryan asked, opening his refrigerator. “Well, if you have a diet coke...” Christine said. “Unfortunately, I don't haveyhave any diet coke, but I have frappe nectar stored here” Bryan claimed. “Oh okay, I like nectar too” Christine said.
 
Bryan then brought two glasses of nectar. “Aw, delicious!” Christine said enjoying her drink. “So uh, about what you said earlier...” Bryan said starting the conversation. “Oh yes, I almost forgot” Christine said “Well, I knew that you are interested in these whole serial-killer things, I think you and I can work together to investigate this case”.
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[[File:Kevin_the_Paramedic.jpg|thumb|200px|Kevin the paramedic]]
The guy’s name was Kevin, he was working as Paramedic in the hospital. “There is someone who want to meet you” Kevin said “She claimed to be your niece”. “Niece? Is it JoanaJoanna or Christine?” Jean thought, “Oh okay, tell her to come here” Jean said.
 
Several moments later, Kevin returned with none other than Christine and also an unfamiliar guy—Bryan. “Hello auntie, sorry to disturb you” Christine said hugging Jean. “Oh, Christine my dear, what make you come here? And who is this?” Jean asked. “This is... uh... my friend, Bryan Schmidt” Christine said, intdorucing Bryan. “Oh, it’s an honor to meet you, Dr. Curtiz” Bryan said shaking Jean’s hand “I’ve heard everything about you back then”.
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“DIE! DIE! DIE!” Mikhaela was still yelling.
 
Christine was about to lossinglosing her consciousness until...
 
“STOP IT RIGHT THERE!”
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“Well, I think there is no other choice, I will tell you” Bryan said, he then told Christine everything about his past relationship with Mikhaela from the beginning until what made them broke up.
 
Christine was speechless, she also felt a little symphathysympathy for Mikhaela after learned that the woman loss her child due to misscariage despite she was attacking her earlier.
 
“That’s all what happened” Bryan said.
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''Meanwhile at the Delgado house.''
 
“Mom, dad, I now this is not the right time, but I would like to introduce you to my... you know, boyfriend” JoanaJoanna said “Since I used to introduce him in the feast party, but...”. “It’s alright, go ahead, let him in” Leona said.
 
A moment later, a young adult man with curly hair entered the house. Both Leona and Enrico were surprised, they recognized the guy.
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"Oh I see..." Leona said.
 
[[File:Joana_and_Kevin.jpg|thumb|left|200px|Joana introduces Kevin.]]“Well, what do you think, mom and dad?” JoanaJoanna said, hoping they would gave their blessing. Enrico and Leona were looking at each other. However, just before Enrico and Leona could answer, Enrico’s cellphone was ringing. It was a call from his office.
 
“Yes?” Enrico said answering the call. “Oh, alright I will be there”.
 
“Sound like I need to go to my office right now, emergency meeting” Enrico said, “Joana“Joanna, you can continue talk with your mother about your boyfriend”.
 
“Oh, okay” JoanaJoanna said.
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Chris and Tamera Redfield arrived in the location soon after they heard that Christine was found. Not only Chris and Tamera. JoanaJoanna also came with her mother, Leona. Jean and Alex also arrived after Daniel called them.
 
Tamera and Chris hugged Christine tightly. They were so happy that their daughter saved. "Thank you... Thank you for saving our daughter, Bryan" Chris said thanking Bryan, who only nodded.
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