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==Welcome!==
Welcome to chapter 8 of A Pleasant Story. Now there's a slightyslightly miserable setting at the moment... so, enjoy!
 
=="Not Fair"==
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''Monday morning''
 
Angela clambered onto the bus with Lilith. Angela looked up the aisle to see Richie in an awful state. He was looking out of the window. His deep brown hair, which was getting long and was starting to curl, was sticking up unevenly. Stubble also protruded from his cheeks. Angela felt sorry for him: his dad's funeral was only yesterday. She sat down next to him and waited a while before gently reaching out to hold his hand. A gentle squeeze from Richie showed he had acknowledged she was there. When the bus stopped at the Dreamer house, Richie stopped looking out of the window to realise Angela looking slightly upset and hurt. Richie felt awful- he didn't want his new girlfriend to feel unloved. He gently moved forward and brushed the hair out of her eyes. She looked up. Richie noticed the look of hurt had vanished. The bus ride became more enjoyable after that. The two sat in silence for the journey, but their feelings for each other were obviously very stongstrong.
 
On the way back home, Angela asked a simple question. "When's your birthday, Richie?"
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"It's just not fair, Marty" she whispered. "It's just not fair."
 
"I know it isn't." he replied, unsure of what to do. He all of a sudden felt really nervous. Why? A simple thought occuredoccurred to him: ''I like her... but does she feel the same?''
 
A sixteen year old Richie walked up to the door of the Goth mansion. He knocked on the door, only to be answered by Mortimer Goth. "Hello there, lad! I'm Mortimer Goth"
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