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==Unpublished Chapters==
==Unpublished Chapters==
==='''<u>Chapter 18 - Cold</u>'''===
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Laurel saw how alone she was. She had seen the Lunar Lakes pact, she had seen Max and Bart. Though it was just from a distance, it made her lonely. She was nothing special for love or power. She would die alone.


The two female Barnacle Bay contestants hadn't moved from the spot where they'd arrived. Patty wept daily. Jonah had left camp in search of weapons and never returned. Serena had sworn she would never start a combat. She wanted to be alive for her Bart when he returned. She would stay with him, then. They could hide on the island, love forever. They could help the new batch of contestants in the next Battles. They would survive together.

Max McDermott was furious. He had learned that Bart was trying to survive for a girl. Some Serena, probably dead by now. He moved through the jungle silently. Then he froze. Bart was walking on the beach towards two people, silhouetted against the pale flames of the rising sun. One, the shorter of the two, jumped up and ran to him, embracing him. "Oh, Serena, I'm alright, I'm okay," Bart soothed the frantic but happy girl. "Oh, Bart, we have won already?" "No, but I had to see you, I needed to know you were okay. Is this all you have?" Bart said, looking around at the meager provisions. Serena bit her lip and nodded. "Wait here. I'll go back to my camp to get some things for you. It isn't far." Max almost killed Bart right then. How dare he put someone else over victory? But no. He would see the body of his girlfriend before he died. Maybe he would realize that the death was inevitable, that it was good, helpful. Serena's death would assist them. Bart walked off, promising Serena he would return soon. Max gripped the spiked club. He could hear Bart's footsteps get farther and farther away. He stood tensed, ready, waiting for the right moment to destroy the weakest piece of Bart. The moment came. He ran forward, and the two girls screamed. The taller one ran, and Max didn't chase her. He was after Serena. She turned to follow her sister into the jungle, but Max caught her by the neck. He flung her to the ground and ran the spike of the club into her chest. Her dying scream, a call for Bart, cut off as she seemed to find peace in her death. Footsteps thudded on the sand, and Max turned, the joyous savagery of murder in his eyes. Bart roared as he saw Serena's body and the trail of blood on the club. Max assumed he'd give up, accept his defeat without a cause anymore. But Bart leapt at Max, knocking the weapon into the jungle. Tears streamed down Bart's face. Serena was dead. There was no cause anymore but for this monster to die. Max recovered from the surprise and began to fight back. He gripped the sides of Bart's head, forcing him back. Then he picked up a stone and brought it down hard on his ally's head. Bart barely had time to grip Serena's cold, still hand before he fell back, dead.

The sun rose over the coldening bodies as Max turned away, his heart as cold as the corpses of his victims.
==='''<u>Chapter 19 - Caught</u>'''===
==='''<u>Chapter 19 - Caught</u>'''===


Revision as of 16:54, 1 August 2013

Intro

This is a page for the authors of Survival Island to contribute ideas. It contains spoilers so don't scroll down unless you want to ruin the suprise.

Chapters

Chapter Author Chapter Release Date Done?
Chapter 18 Hurshbr Thursday 1 August Yes
Chapter 19 Blue12porcupine Monday 5 August Yes
Chapter 20 Spell-Caster Jr Thursday 8 August No

People Contesting

People Contesting Riverview Barnacle Bay Hiddden Springs Luna Lakes Sunlit Tides Monte Vista Aurora Skies Sunset Valley Twinbrook Bridgeport Appaloosa Plains Starlight Shores Moonlight Falls
Person 1 Bob Newbie Bart Inkbeard Emmit Preston Carly Benton Piper Sparks Hudson Thomas Cassidy Wrede Holly Alto Jade Greenwood Kaitlen Ashenburg
Person 2 Laurel Grisby Jonah Lai Sidney Shawkti Jax Benton Ethan Tanner Khang Seng Karen Helgason VJ Alvi Chase Bayless Bronson Littler
Person 3 Maximus McDermott Serena Abe Charles Winterly Jareth Alto Sahan Diwan Teresa DeLuca Arvid Oss Lisa Bunch Newton Baker Jett Atkins
Person 4

Betty Simovitch

 Patty Abe Annie Tong Christa Landgraab Abrianna King Rosaria Stefani Edvin Oss Michael Bachelor Shark Racket Elspeth Cook

Writers so far: Blue12porcupine, Spell-Caster Jr and Hurshbr (Contact Blue12porcupine if you want to join)

Characters Death Log

  • Jonah Lai (murded by Maximus)
  • Maximus McDermott (exiled then died by Hunger)
  • Emmit Preston (ambushed by Barncle bay people)
  • Sidney Shawkti (ditto)
  • Charles Winterly (ditto)
  • Serana Abe (murdered by Patty Abe)
  • Christa Landgraaab (accindently killed by Carly Benton)
  • Jax Benton (Frightened by the ghost of Christa Landgraab)
  • Laurel Grisby (murdered by Cruz Mantigale)
  • Jacoby Grubb (metorite purposly killed by Alexander) 
  • Annie Tong (murdered by Elspeth Cook)
  • Elspeth Cook (murdered by Brian)
  • Holly Alto (Plague from Grim baby)

Approved Ideas

  • This becomes a trilogy, ending with Alex II overthrowing his father and returning the land to normal.
  • He has a clone son - already written
  • Pearl Inkbeard as Alexander Nanny and she has a brother contesting, she could talk sense into Alexander II and could in the end help overthrow Alexander I 
  • Jonai Lai is sent to find food by the Barncle Bay people, he comes back and gives them the food where they run off and he looks to Riverview people for help. Max kills him and then he exiled by Riverview people and dies by hunger
  • When the Hidden Springs ship crahsed Annie hides in the ship scared and frightened, the other come out the ship and are ambushed and killed, Annie Tong comes out and survives
  • Carly and Jax agree to kill the rest of Lunar lake people when they are asleep, but Carly falls in love with Jareth. Jax tries to Jareth but Carly snatched the spear off and accidently kill by Carly. Jax is exiled and dies of fright when seeing the ghost of Christa
  • Laurel falls in love with Jacoby. Cruz dosen't want them to love each other and kills Laurel. Jacoby find a mega-phone and rants about Alexander cruel ways, he killed by a metorite. There is a small rebel but it is crushed in weeks
  • Elspeth Cook falls in love with the Grim Reaper and the Grim tells her to go a killing spree, she has a baby with the grim, but gets killed by Brian. Brian takes the baby to Sunnyset people were Holly hides it and looks after it, but the baby is curse. Its spreads the plague to Holly whos dies. Grim turns the baby into a child so she can look after herself. She goes on a killing spree

Ideas waiting for Approval

  • Carly Benton's mother, Dahlia Benton, breaks in to Alexandra I's place and kidnaps Alexandra II to make Alexandra I let Carly out of the game
  • Halfway through the fight they could enter a wild beast onto the island, forcing the sims to find shelter, then someone could be killed by it
  • A pack of people could come acroos a greenhouse, full of plants and food. They all so hungry and the food is poinsououns, one sees a cake and eats but gets eaten by a cowplant another eats toxix jellybean and die. They leave of sadness and then another selfish team come in and drink the milk and they turn into a elder and die of old age, whilst another doesn't drink enough and turns into a baby
  • One could accumulate a megaphone and start shouting to Alexander saying he is tyant and Alexander could kill him
  • One could fall in quicksand and get buried alive
  • The water could electocute you and kill you
  • They could be a forest fire and kill a few
  • There could also be a blizzard and die of freezing
  • One could get struct by lightning
  • In the water one get kill by a shark or kraken
  • A couple die of thirst and starvation
  • A group of people could find a underground ancient tomb, they could go inside, one could die of a mummies curse, some could die being buried alive, one could be cursed into a toad and get eaten and one could die of transmutation
  • The vampire could die of sunlight
  • A couple could die of a hail storm
  • A plague could break out and some could die
  • One could electrocuted by a gnome
  • They could be a killer attack of flies
  • Some could get frighten by ghosts
  • One could die of falling Satellite, money or meteorite
  • One mental sim could die from running around with scissors
  • One could fall in a wishing well

Unpublished Chapters

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Chapter 19 - Caught

Alexander led the way, a torchlight in his hand and in the other the map of the tunnels. Behind him followed Pearl, looking scared. Her bodysuit stuck to her like clue, at least Alexander couldn't see she was scared. He was too busy trying to find the way out.

The tunnels hadn't been used in decades, there were cobwebs everywhere. The tunnels were used by the rebels after the civil war. After Alexander I took control, some people were unhappy and created the tunnels. A month later they filled it with dynamite, there were 13 of them. One of them untrustworthy, they told Alexander I and they were found out. He killed them all brutally and showed the rest of SimValley. They were all forced to watch it, this was The first time Alexander showed his true self.

"How long left?" Asked Pearl.

"Not long left, just one more turn and walk straight ahead and were there," replied Alexander.

Alexander I sat in his chair like normal, he stared at the TV. He wondered what his son was doing, he changed channels to Alexander room. Alexander and Pearl were watching Goth Games. Pearl was crouched in the corner looking terrified at the games, whilst Alexander eyes were glued to the TV. Suddenly they disappeared for a second, "maybe a flicker of light?" thought Alexander. He hit the rewind button and the put it on slow motion . It wasn't a flicker of light, they actually disappeared. They must be a hologram, Pearl must have kidnapped him. 

He will do anything to get his son back, no one must know that she managed to kidnap his own son without him realising. People would think him week and unfit to be a king. They would rebel, he will find Pearl and Alexander II. He will kill Pearl horribly and she will pay. Luckily he out attacking devise on his son, now all he had to do was tract him down.

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