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Patty Abe ran through the forest, barely seeing the brush get thicker and taller as she ran. Tears flew backwards from her face as she sprinted. Her sister had had so many wishes, dreams, hopes...She had been so hopeful when no one else was. She had had great desires for graduation, college, life with Bart, a family of her own, and that one man in the arena had never let her have the chance. Now Patty's desire was for revenge. |
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Max was completely and utterly satisfied. All the supplies from both slaughtered camps were his own, the people back home knew he wasn't one to mess with, and Bart and his precious little Serena were both out of the picture and onto the spit. One didn't refuse meat in the arena. That other girl had probably seen enough of his power to stay away forever. Bart had mentioned her briefly as Patty. She seemed a bit old for the arena, but whatever. She was no threat. |
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Patty had found a cluster of trees where a few branches overlapped enough for her to camp there temporarily. She sat on the triangular seat the branches made and sobbed for her best friend and her sister. Whoever that murderer was on the beach, he would die. How easy to make it was another decision. Suddenly, her movements stilled. She held her breath without thinking about it, surprised at her instincts. A muscular, orange-haired man was moving through the jungle below her. She almost leapt right out of the tree to bring him down, but she didn't. She knew that this required more finesse. She wanted to kill him in the best way, in a way to let the families at home know that any evilness, in Max or Alexander, couldn't go unpunished. So she had to get there slowly. There's a way to outwit everyone. Even a killing machine. So she scurried as silently as she could until she was in front of him, and afte summoning all the gut she had, threw a banana down at him. He tensed, readied his club, looked up. Patty smiled down at him, and recognition crossed his face. He wanted to climb up and kill her, but he couldn't. He could see the branches wouldn't support a weight heavier than hers. So he asked, "Why the banana?" Forcing herself to keep a friendly tone, she said, "Heck, you can have 'em all. I'm allergic." "Are you by any chance Patty?" "In the flesh. Who are you?" "Max McDermott. And I'm winning the Battles, so you might as well climb down and let me kill you now." Patty laughed at his 'come down and let me kill you'. "I may throw bananas, but I'm not stupid enough to come down to a big guy like you. Pact, maybe?" Max was flattered. Finally, some recognition of how powerful he was. Besides that Patty was obviously a genius, she was hot, and stealthy. Bart needed a replacement. "Sure," he said. With a little squeal like she was elated, Patty climbed down and pecked him on the cheek. "So, are you older or younger than Serena?" Max asked curiously. Up close, she was clearly done with puberty. "Older. Twenty-one, to be exact," Patty replied, angry that Max had known enough about Serena to know her name. "You're ''not'' a teen?" Max said incredulously. She laughed. "You look a bit too mature for the Goth Battles too. You're what, twenty-two?" Patty's strategy was becoming clearer in her mind. She was a talented flirt, and Max was obviously flatterable. Soon murder would be pheasable. |
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Max stared up at the stars, wondering how an attraction happened so fast. Was it normal, or was it Patty, or was it him? He'd never had a girlfriend before. He knew almost nothing about it, but he felt drawn to his new ally. He imagined she liked him too. Who wouldn't, after seeing what he could do, how deadly he was? He'd have to kill her eventually, but that could wait. He scooted closer to Patty, slowly. Suddenly, she sat up and pressed her lips to his. Max reacted as Patty hoped, as enthusiastic as she pretended to be. She knew that, if she could pull off the kill itself, she would have victory over him. Love was a dangerous weapon in the right hands. |
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==Trivia== |
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Revision as of 07:13, 16 August 2013
Intro
This is a page for the authors of Survival Island to contribute ideas. It contains spoilers so don't scroll down unless you want to ruin the suprise.
Chapters
| Chapter | Author | Chapter Release Date | Done? |
|---|---|---|---|
| Chapter 18 | Hurshbr | Thursday 1 August | Yes |
| Chapter 19 | Blue12porcupine | Monday 5 August | Yes |
| Chapter 20 | Spell-Caster Jr | Thursday 8 August | No |
People Contesting
| People Contesting | Riverview | Barnacle Bay | Hiddden Springs | Luna Lakes | Sunlit Tides | Monte Vista | Aurora Skies | Sunset Valley | Twinbrook | Bridgeport | Appaloosa Plains | Starlight Shores | Moonlight Falls | ||
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Person 1 | Bob Newbie | Bart Inkbeard | Emmit Preston | Carly Benton | Piper Sparks | Hudson Thomas | Cassidy Wrede | Holly Alto | Jade Greenwood | Kaitlen Ashenburg | |||||
| Person 2 | Laurel Grisby | Jonah Lai | Sidney Shawkti | Jax Benton | Ethan Tanner | Khang Seng | Karen Helgason | VJ Alvi | Chase Bayless | Bronson Littler | |||||
| Person 3 | Maximus McDermott | Serena Abe | Charles Winterly | Jareth Alto | Sahan Diwan | Teresa DeLuca | Arvid Oss | Lisa Bunch | Newton Baker | Jett Atkins | |||||
| Person 4 | Patty Abe | Annie Tong | Christa Landgraab | Abrianna King | Rosaria Stefani | Edvin Oss | Michael Bachelor | Shark Racket | Elspeth Cook |
Writers so far: Blue12porcupine, Spell-Caster Jr and Hurshbr (Contact Blue12porcupine if you want to join)
Characters Death Log
- Jonah Lai (murded by Maximus)
- Maximus McDermott (exiled then died by Hunger)
- Emmit Preston (ambushed by Barncle bay people)
- Sidney Shawkti (ditto)
- Charles Winterly (ditto)
- Serana Abe (murdered by Patty Abe)
- Christa Landgraaab (accindently killed by Carly Benton)
- Jax Benton (Frightened by the ghost of Christa Landgraab)
- Laurel Grisby (murdered by Cruz Mantigale)
- Jacoby Grubb (metorite purposly killed by Alexander)
- Annie Tong (murdered by Elspeth Cook)
- Elspeth Cook (murdered by Brian)
- Holly Alto (Plague from Grim baby)
Approved Ideas
- This becomes a trilogy, ending with Alex II overthrowing his father and returning the land to normal.
He has a clone son- already written- Pearl Inkbeard as Alexander Nanny and she has a brother contesting, she could talk sense into Alexander II and could in the end help overthrow Alexander I
- Jonai Lai is sent to find food by the Barncle Bay people, he comes back and gives them the food where they run off and he looks to Riverview people for help. Max kills him and then he exiled by Riverview people and dies by hunger
- When the Hidden Springs ship crahsed Annie hides in the ship scared and frightened, the other come out the ship and are ambushed and killed, Annie Tong comes out and survives
- Carly and Jax agree to kill the rest of Lunar lake people when they are asleep, but Carly falls in love with Jareth. Jax tries to Jareth but Carly snatched the spear off and accidently kill by Carly. Jax is exiled and dies of fright when seeing the ghost of Christa
- Laurel falls in love with Jacoby. Cruz dosen't want them to love each other and kills Laurel. Jacoby find a mega-phone and rants about Alexander cruel ways, he killed by a metorite. There is a small rebel but it is crushed in weeks
- Elspeth Cook falls in love with the Grim Reaper and the Grim tells her to go a killing spree, she has a baby with the grim, but gets killed by Brian. Brian takes the baby to Sunnyset people were Holly hides it and looks after it, but the baby is curse. Its spreads the plague to Holly whos dies. Grim turns the baby into a child so she can look after herself. She goes on a killing spree
Ideas waiting for Approval
- Carly Benton's mother, Dahlia Benton, breaks in to Alexandra I's place and kidnaps Alexandra II to make Alexandra I let Carly out of the game
- Halfway through the fight they could enter a wild beast onto the island, forcing the sims to find shelter, then someone could be killed by it
- A pack of people could come acroos a greenhouse, full of plants and food. They all so hungry and the food is poinsououns, one sees a cake and eats but gets eaten by a cowplant another eats toxix jellybean and die. They leave of sadness and then another selfish team come in and drink the milk and they turn into a elder and die of old age, whilst another doesn't drink enough and turns into a baby
- One could accumulate a megaphone and start shouting to Alexander saying he is tyant and Alexander could kill him
- One could fall in quicksand and get buried alive
- The water could electocute you and kill you
- They could be a forest fire and kill a few
- There could also be a blizzard and die of freezing
- One could get struct by lightning
- In the water one get kill by a shark or kraken
- A couple die of thirst and starvation
- A group of people could find a underground ancient tomb, they could go inside, one could die of a mummies curse, some could die being buried alive, one could be cursed into a toad and get eaten and one could die of transmutation
- The vampire could die of sunlight
- A couple could die of a hail storm
- A plague could break out and some could die
- One could electrocuted by a gnome
- They could be a killer attack of flies
- Some could get frighten by ghosts
- One could die of falling Satellite, money or meteorite
- One mental sim could die from running around with scissors
- One could fall in a wishing well
Unpublished Chapters
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Trivia
- Only Blue12porcupine, Spell-Caster Jr and Hurshbr can edit this
- Blue12porcupine approves ideas
- Anyone can add ideas
- Kaitlen Ashenburg is the only Fanon sim and you can find her on the exchange here